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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whoever plays minecraft
Anyone want a cool seed?
Because 1606377695512438131 (Java Edition 1.21.1 or over, although I heard it kinda works on Bedrock too) is awesome. You spawn on an ancient city open to the sky. Wait a little while for the water nearby you to flow down to where you are, and you’re able to jump into it and swim up to the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m not particularly against the “warrior female” trope, but I am against completely messing up a character’s personality for what’s basically no reason.
Making Martha into an Astrid-like fierce girl would make no sense narratively, nor would it fit with Linus’s role for her in the series. Like Ellette said, I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
@the_lost-journal @theshadow wow that was a good chapter!!
I realize I haven’t been voting, but I’m very indecisive on that kinda thing…….and honestly, if you just waited for me to reach a decision it’ll slow down everything. So, uh…..I don’t know if I’ll be voting this time. But I will keep reading! And if there’s a particularly strong…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Wowwww
That looks awesome.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
G, P, and Z. My favorite characters would be Robert and Rachel. Least favorite is probably Alyona. I don’t really dislike any of them though. Some of them are kind of jerks, but they’re funny.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
G, P, X
(Judith is totally a vandal.)
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Ruth replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
Who is your favorite and least favorite so far?
My favorite is Robert, but other than him I kinda like Blaze.
And I don’t like literally any of the girls.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS!!!
GIRL!
I knew you could write but I didn’t know you could write!
MAN! How do you do that!
Also, please excuse the cringiness of the first chapter. It has absolutely no point other than to establish the characters and setting, and it will probably be the first thing I rewrite 😅
*screech!* No!!! NONONO! Whatever…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
“What are you doing?” Katerina pulled Alyona back a little to see.
“If we can’t win, then I won’t let anyone else win!” She said, her eyes lighting up with glee. “I am making the most vial, but invisible, concoction! I will go around and pour it into other team’s batter and make theirs ten times more disgusting!” Sh…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
I’ll be praying. My family’s been sick too. My mom lost her voice for two days.
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Ruth replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I didn’t realize “wilting violet” was a British thing. 😂It just seems like the natural word to use sometimes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
Yay!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
I hope Andy comes back into the story because I like what I’ve seen of him!!!
He will return.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Your names are similar but yours is more fun to type out
Hopefully that’s a good thing….. 😅
Oh duh. *facepalm* that’s right.
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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, okay. As long as we’re all on the same page here. lol.
Yeah, the female boss trope is just a trope to me, and in this case it wouldn’t work. It does work sometimes, not this time.
It’s a British phrase. *important sniff*
I read far to much British literature.Ah, I see. Well I can understand integrating your reading into…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
She pounded up after him, yelling insults in return. Not that most girls would call Heart-friend or Beloved an insult. Liora was special.
Ooooo 🫢
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, okay. As long as we’re all on the same page here. lol.
wilting violet.
It’s a British phrase. *important sniff*
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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
If anything, these dragons are like horses, and no one I know would say “horses are too boyish a topic for girls.” Quite to the contrary, I know tons of girls who like horses.
YES, exactly, I was thinking of the dragon like a horse. Martha would be brave for taming it and learning how to ride it, not dramatically screaming her way int…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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