Andrew

@ellette-giselle

Hmm.

Could you use this to portray a character flaw? Idk exactly what you have in mine for flaws though.

Hmmmmm…

@linus-smallprint

From what I know of your second book, Kalmar does seem kind of accurate. If he has a redemption arc, I would compare him to Edmund Pevensie.

@ellette-giselle

In this chapter, you did a better job of showing Leon and Julian are in a place they used to call home. And I’m not just referring to their comments upon seeing the village in the valley. Their interactions with the Klein family, falling right into the traditions, showed this even better than their words.

I like the feel of the…[Read more]

@hybridlore   K.

QUESTION FOR THOSE WHO HAVE READ ALL POSTED SECTIONS.

So, as we all know, and @elishavet-pidyon pointed out….. Julian took that first encounter full-tilt and without a necessary dose of wise caution. However….. now I’m a little stuck.

Julian and Leon are living in the house of a family who worship’s idols. Due to their c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I was wondering why you never said anything even tho you were active yesterday. XD

@ellette-giselle

What section? Kingdom Pen, why didn’t you tell me about this? *Goes back to read*

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

I have a question for anyone who’s read the section I posted yesterday.

Sobbing cause I’m stuck.

I’d much rather work on something else.

ugh.

After some comments y’all made I wonder if I’m about to take this curve too fast…… but it’s already a SUPER long book and I haven’t even started……….

ugh.

@the_lost-journal

Now you have to change your pfp to “dead potato” which I would assume would be a plate of frenchfries.

lolololol.

also, I LOVE the quote at the bottom and the fact that you said it was “not shakespear” just about killed me. XD XD

@linus-smallprint

lol. That’s a good one.

@linus-smallprint

I can’t believe you ended the paragraph with Rutabaga!

Every time he does that I die laughing.

@rae @ellette-giselle

@koshka

those are perfect!!!

@theducktator

I’m not sure I like that last comparison. Kalmar is amazing, and Eric…drives me crazy. No offense. I’m just still mad he betrayed Martha.

Who would you compare Eric to then?

@whalekeeper

You know what, I changed my mind. The more I think of it, I should have done this:

@keilah-h

Alan looks a good deal less….bookish?…..than Alcatraz (where did he get THAT name anyway? Who wants to be named after an island with a jail on it?) though

Alcatraz was named after Alcatraz the First, a famous occulator who lived around the same time that the pyramids were built. Alcatraz’s family frequently uses these traditional nam…[Read more]

@loopylin

@anyone what classes do you want to do?

Barnes is overseeing some literature-related class, so there’s that

@rae

Oh, your bear one is great….. but i prefer this method.

@rae

skylight one is awesome btw.

@rae    @keilah-h

No, writer problem eighteen is totally mine when my search history includes how to hide a pregnancy, computer hacking techniques, does getting your throat slit kill you instantly? how long can you really survive without food or water before you can’t function, how long would it take a person to freeze to death, best places to…[Read more]