Andrew

@keilah-h

It’s really, really good!

@savannah_grace2009 ohhhh ok!

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

@whalekeeper

 (This is me, looking for new ways to say thank you.)

lolll

@ellette-giselle thanks! I’m really proud of his posing too, especially considering the fact that Drachenheul paws have different joint placement than human legs, so kneeling like a human would be uncomfortable for him. I had to try a couple times to get it right.

@theshadow cool! I’ll definitely read this. If nothing else, I’m returning the favor since I made you read mine XD

@savannah_grace2009

The aversion to water is mainly just an Otto/Naami thing, because everything is so extreme for her, and it’s like one triggers/burns the other, if that makes sense!

Ahhh. Makes sense.

I was kinda basing it off the dragon in Revelation.

In that case, it makes sense.

I love that scene, it’s so funnyyyy

It’s probably so cring…

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@savannah_grace2009

I have made it to the 26th chapter of your WIP. Having read so much now, I can tell you have put a lot of thought into your world-building. You’ve got a variety of cultures, locations, and races. I can tell you’ve put thought into the history as well.

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

A cruelly twisted game. They wanted to brake Ardenta. They cut them off from their land for no good reason but to break their spirits. To see Joseph and the others give would be more rewarding than killing them. The people of the Empire have a lot of interesting beliefs about death and dying with honor and such, and seeing…[Read more]

@theshadow Emmerich is a cool name.

I like it, although I’m biased cause I have an Emmerich in one of my own story ideas. He’s the main advisor to the mercenary-turned-king main character. (And no, this has nothing to do with TF2, it’s actually based off like 5 different games.) It’s his last name though, not his first one.

@the_lost-journal lol nah just for laughs. I’m not gonna pull out a bullet.

@ellette-giselle

Mercy, on the other hand, is not so prevalent in their beliefs. They’ll show mercy should it benefit them…. or if it plays into some twisted game their enjoying.

Ah. I remember for Aaron, it was so that he would use his skills to turn people to the gods of the empire. What was it for Joseph and his friends?

Duly noted. Though the…

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@the_lost-journal

you’re welcome!!

@theducktator @the_lost-journal lolllll

@the_lost-journal

🤣🤣🤣

@linus-smallprint

wow! Long reply. A little intimidating……

Interesting. I like these ideas. I think I shall certainly use some of them! I like that gentle yet firm approach. It’s a good idea.

Huh. I think this is one of the only times I bring up Adrain….. but I may be wrong. Oh I totally agree that other religions can have…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I haven’t read the latest section just yet, but here are my thoughts on the previous one. Got a few of them this time.

Julian and Leon. “Come,” he said in a low voice. “She knows you are here, and she is waiting.”

Julian shook his head, and Leon spoke. “No, Rolf.”

If you are still looking for ideas on how the two former sold…[Read more]

Me: “Nine out of ten doctors recommend that you breathe.”

Brother: “Only nine out of ten?”

@hybridlore

😂😂😂

@hybridlore

wow. It’s like -30 right now over here.

Huh. Never heard anyone describe him like that. 😅 We’ll have to see!

@the_lost-journal

No. I think you two are probably the only ones who write creepy stuff regularly.