@raxforge
Active 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh, I get it. I thought Quinton was the name.
Okay….. hmm. This’ll be interesting. Your grandmother is a woman of good taste when it comes to names if I do say so myself.
If Kleins and Roland aren’t important to the story anymore, spending too much time with them may only make the reader disappointed when they are left b…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)
Are there two or three more?
There are 6. Quinton was almost the name of the fifth, but my Gunny (who was very picky when it came to names) decided to make that his middle name instead. So you still have 3 to go.
So,…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey! Our could snap just ended up here in Canada, We are finally in plus temperatures, and there’s hope that spring exsists! I don’t need 10 snowballs being hurled at me!
But I guess I can’t argue with being hit.
Currently working on outlining my second book right now. I will let you know when I’ve met the quota.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Uh…. not really. It’s kind of a mess.
So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)
Are there two or three more?
I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed out since for both of the previous books, the protagonists just ended up staying with…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Glad you are back! I hope things went well with that.
Where were we? Ah yes, you were stealing names from my Gunny for your characters. (No, I won’t tell you what she named my dad’s other three brothers. It will be funnier if you stumble across those names by accident.)
I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
That was so good!!! I’m so worried about Baron now. 😢 He can’t die; I like him too much!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
okay thanks! I’ll think about it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
okay, well I may wait until next time. i have a tone of stuff going on. We’ll see. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 Â Nice lizard! How old are you now?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
what is it?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
haha! And you made the rules if I remember correctly….. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
This is the cake:

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
You threw ten at me, now I threw twenty back.
The 50 I’ve been saving for a
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@anyone who cares
it’s my birthday today!!!
My mom made me a cheesecake and I made a lizard design on it with chocolate! I don’t have the picture yet though.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I wrote 500 words.
I wrote 700 to be exact, but I’ll save those.
I shall now snowball you!!!!
SNOWBALL X20
AND
YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN YOUR WIP COLOR OF HOPE OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH 50 SNOWBALLS!
SO.
THERE.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)
So glad you liked the section!
Yeah, poor Roland.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Nice!!! I like it! Very good scene! You had me pretty tensed up! XD
Yes, this really was a good scene.
I bet he’s gonna die in the end.One small problem I had….. the father is encouraging Baron and Jenna’s relationship, but Baron is not a Believer, and God commands that we no be unequally yoked. I would think that if her father was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator
Story 10!
Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
HELLO EVERYONE!!!! I’M BACK!!!!!!!!
I survived– barely, and am well and alive– sort of.
(Came down with a nasty cold the minute I got home. Ugh.)
Anyhow, it’s so good to be back!! I have the next section, and I may post another today as well. I hav…[Read more]
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