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Active 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Honestly, their economic system makes no sense. They just have infinite money???
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper honestly I loved the worldbuilding, there was just one problem with it:
the fact that elves completely discount all human science. It doesn’t really make sense to me. As a person who’s very invested in science, I just can’t see how literally everything we come up with–every theory, every calculation–could be wrong. Don’t get me…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Yes! It’s back!
My love of dance has influenced my attitude toward critique a lot. It’s taught me to want corrections. One thing my favorite ballet teacher always says is that listening to your corrections is the best way to improve, and I’ve heard variations of this from the other teachers as well. The aforementioned favorite…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh wow, you’re an adult now. Yeah, paperwork, insurance, college, taxes, a job…good luck! XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper I definitely will!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon yep, cheesecake! My mom makes a really good one.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae how did I miss this?
I might be back with tips, but if I can’t think of any I’ll just see what everyone else has to say.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!!!
@whalekeeper lol it was my mom that made it, I just decorated it
@theducktator 18. It’s crazy. My dad had me sign some healthcare paperwork to confirm I’m staying under their plan and not splitting off to pay for my own, and my brother was like “Welp, now that you’re 18 you’re gonna have to start doing paperwork.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
I imagine scenes and plot points behind almost any instrumental song. But when it’s from Apollo 13, which I have never watched… I’m not perfectly comfortable just connecting the two. And of course it feels awkward to explain to people.
yep, pretty much. I see my own stories playing out in my mind, or the plot of the origi…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Syph
He had to what? He blinked at Eddie. A dark blue flush crept up his neck. Water droplets appeared and disappeared in the air around him.
“Oh. Guppies. For a dance? But I don’t know of any other spritelings to pair with. It could take an indefinite amount of time to even find someone who wouldn’t be—oh tadpoles—…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness… I used to watch that so much with my siblings 😂 You’re right, it was a good show
yesss!!! I used to love it. I had an animal-themed birthday party when I was like 8 or 9 because of it.
I’m not really into it anymore, but an online friend of mine writes crossover fanfictions and the wild kratts characters appear in the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
@esther-c yes, this feels a little more like a letter! good job!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle lol those memes are great!!
Movies are pretty much never better than the book, but I can think of a few movies which were almost as good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m in Brookside Stories
one of the ladies emailed and said they are having tech problems at the moment. I think that’s why.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
*rubs hands together* you just wait and see. XD
Soo… is it pronounced to rhyme with bay-lick?
uh sure. lololol. Never heard that word before, but yes, it would rhyme.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*screeches* Fiends! Thou shalt pay for this!
Ooh, that looks fun! I think I’ll join the July one.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
WYOH!!!!! NO! Bad creature! Go away!
Ugh. let’s try this again.
Why is Julian asking this question when he is also documenting event is his own journal?
because for one, Julian has a bit of an argumentative mentality. For two, he views it as more of a past time whereas Leon wants it to be a very orderly account and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
So you thinking he’s gonna be your fav?
Oh fun! I’ll hunt you up when I feel like getting in an argument. XD XD
yes, you did call it.
How loyal are these people to thier gods? From this, I would guess that they wouldn’t be willing to die for them.
Not many Romans (or people who shared such a culture) were. T…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Julian dropped onto the bed and folded his hands behind his head. “Why? Who’s going to read it?”
Why is Julian asking this question when he is also documenting event is his own journal?
The five joined the townspeople and listened to the students, who were marked by the brown, wide-sleeved, open robes they wore over their tunic…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Roland looked up. “I’m going with you.”
Called it.
“Well, Roland, what’s next on our path to the Capital?”
So they are heading to the capital then. Did I just miss this earlier? I really need to stop missing things.
“None that has lived to tell the tale,” Roland replied. “Though one boy was found drowned in the river a few days…
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