Andrew

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Hey, quick question. I’m considering giving Iskyagus some primary henchmen. Characters like Mai and Ty Lee in Avatar, or Kallus and Ruku in Star Wars Rebels. Kind of some other wizards who are just under him. I’m trying to decide whether or not I like the idea. I often find these types of characters a…[Read more]

@loopylin @theshadow

Just so the two of you know, I will be taking down the link for the second draft of TNPT at the end of this month. If you cannot finish reading it in that time, don’t worry about it. I can recruit you again when I get to the third draft.

@ellette-giselle

For some reason I started to imagine Hassan as Middle Eastern when you mentioned his name. Probably wearing a turban of sorts.

The men forced him to his feet and dragged his arms up and apart, lashing them to the branches.

So, it’s basically crucifixion, except you don’t get the nails, and you get to stand on the ground. That’s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint I’m a girl and I agree with you on that lol

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore

*promptly rescues Leon and Rolf, gives them new identities so they can hide from you and they disappear into the city* 
*straps on several guns and bolts. Snatches Alec and slams him against the wall.*

Girls are weird.

@keilah-h

Hmm. I guess we’ll have to see.

@hybridlore

Fine then!!

*pulls out dagger, grabs Alec, and holds blade to his throat.* BACK OFF!!

yeah, we’ll have to see what happens.

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

@hybridlore

Um, I’m threatening Alec and his world totally has guns.

So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?

IN ONE TOWN!

The so they shut down the main market that reached the inland. This would still be going on in coastal towns, but that town reached a bigger part of the Empire and also had a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

*whips around with a hand on my gun*

I wouldn’t.

@keilah-h

I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious.

Yes…. but the only time they were seen was in Clonabay, and i mentioned the amount of different cultures that are all mixed in there. No one is really noticing anything in that city. Ya know? Plus, Leon and Rolf are in such a bad state that the people of the Empire…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@raxforge

Go ahead, Glace would love to kill him.

Not to mention I think Igua is in here too…

Technology vs. magic, the ultimate battle of fun…

In which evil will probably triumph over good

@raxforge

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@keilah-h

Hmm. So what might be confusing?

You want to try and bounce your thoughts off of me?

@ellette-giselle yep!

@keilah-h

You read the very newest section from today?

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@savannah_grace2009

Compound Fracture!!!!!! I remember him lol

AND WYOH!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!! so many memories!!!!

you three…your characters somehow ALWAYS hated each other and wanted to kill each other…
THE DRAMA that always happened when us four were together in an RP hahaha

lol, yes, our characters were a blast together.

Did you hea…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I miss collecting dragon pics to post on here for no reason but to annoy everyone…

That was so much fun!

Good times