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NEXT SECTION!!!

Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
The Empire<…

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@theshadow

Oooo!! I like this!! This is getting good!

And, what if, what if we don’t make it?

This is a little cluncky because of the punctuation. If you did: “And what if–– what if we don’t make it?” or “And what if. . . what if we don’t make it?” either of those would work well. Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrif…[Read more]

@keilah-h

@hybridlore

Thanks you two.

As for online, I don’t trust it. I’ve heard and seen too many online things get hacked for my liking. 😅

Thanks for the suggestion though!

@keilah-h

*Grins and steeples fingers together*

Ah, a KaPeefer finally asked this most interesting of questions…

XD

Short story: “Fork the Gork!” Is a rally cry from one of my sister’s books (her Beliriegn children’s story, if she ever talks about it on here). Certain characters tend to use it with conjunction with their own battle cry “Fork…[Read more]

@koshka true, true.

btw what exactly is a gork?

@keilah-h

Perhaps not, but it would be interesting to see what people noticed it.

@theducktator oh yeah

I don’t remember the aftermath that well. I remember the storm (thankfully our house wasn’t damaged) but not about what went on afterward.

@keilah-h

That one.

@theducktator yeah I’m in Florida. The one that hit last year in October?

@keilah-h

The one that hit Florida. Milton, I think.

Thanks!

@theducktator oh.

That is concerning.

I didn’t know that.

Which hurricane was it?

also your poem is hilarious

@rae ahahahaha

@beth-torres

Ryla

The look on the face of the other boy told Ryla that this was not an isolated incident. Suddenly the boy on the floor grabbed his hat and leapt to his feet. Startled, Ryla fell into the wall.

The boy pointed at her. “Do you eat strawberry leaves?”

Ryla hugged her bag closer. “No?” Was that wrong? What was a strawberry? “Who are you?”

@koshka

Thank you! I tried the Get in Touch page a week or two ago, but I haven’t heard back.

@theducktator

XD

Oh gracious. That’s quite a parody.

It is concerning though. I wonder if there’s any other way to contact her.

@beth-torres

Thank you. *bows* The concerning thing is that Kathleen’s last appearance lines up with the hurricanes…

@the_lost-journal

That’s an awfully short reply for my epic Veggietales parody.😒😂 But yeah, I have no idea. I’m hoping this post gets their attention.

I’m sorry that happened to you.

@ellette-giselle aww man that’s horrible!

@ellette-giselle My brother, whose hair goes down to his neck, tucks his hair behind his ears all the time. We actually had to tell him to do it less cause my mom doesn’t want him to push on the back of his ears every time he does it.