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Active 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
*gasp* He did not! OH MY WORD! HE CALLED HIM LITTLE BROTHER!!!!!!! 😍😍🥹
*Calms down*
I literally gasped when I read that. 😂
Rory
Rory started and looked up at Leo, his mind racing. Little brother…. the first born were the elite, making the younger siblings inferiors. Being called little brother was the highest of insults. But……[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER started the topic Fantasy Religions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
My world has two main religions, one evil, one based off of Christianity. I’m having difficulty with the second one, in particular naming the God, and figuring out how in depth to go as it’s not the main plot, as well as wondering how to avoid accidently falling into heresy. Does anyone have any tips for fantasy religions?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 5 months ago
I found two songs for Ryla and Ardon, a couple in my WIP. Happy Together by the Turtles, and for the end of the book, Paint it Black, by the Rolling Stones.
I should find more songs…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Nevermind, I double clicked and that worked.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m having difficulty with Proton. Do I have to download something to read it? It took me to a folder with chapters, but each individual chapter won’t open when I click it.
A friend told me that teaching me how to use tech was like teaching his grandma, and unfortunately, he’s probably right.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@liberty super cool!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @raxforge
Aww, my pastor’s daughter has an Aussie she rescued. She’s hilarious.
Sypher
He gave a playful bow to the wriggling creature in Ellie’s arms.
“Honored to make your aquantance, you Blackjack.” He straightened, tightening his sash and grinning. “He’s a handful. Looks like great fun though, having an Animal.”
The…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Leo
The elevator closed after them. Leo punched in the number 2 button and leaned back against the wall. With a whirl and a rattle they began to decend.
He glanced over at the kid. Rory was quiet–quieter than usual at least–after the conversation over tile. Leo noted the way he subconsciously gripped the side rail. Not very…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
And for y’all’s information, we have just reached over 12,000 words on the completed chapters doc.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 15 is out gang!
I think I need to rethink this chapter a little. I have no intensive to take James side in here, it just seems like he is being irrational for no reason. I also really need to work on Sara. She has zero character development because I’ve only just thrown her…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@liberty nice! I’m guessing he has some connection to wolves/dogs?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint I’ll check it out!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Nope, ever saw the hugging one. (That I remember…..) I think I just saw the outline.
Yeah, KP team hasn’t gotten back to me on any of my stuff either. I think They’re kinda gone. (which may mean that we won’t get kicked off when we age out after all. 🤫)
Thanks! I will.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Stripe with the girl hugging him? Didn’t you see that one? Or are you referring to the generic Kunulf with the crossbow?
The climbing one was for an essay I write about a year ago on whether or not it is okay for Christians to write fiction. I wanted to have it published on here, which is why I joined this site, but the Kingdom…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Ahhhhh! I never saw the stripe one! SO CUTE! and I love the climbing one! is that for the book?
Okay, back to topic.
Thanks so much. I think I could figure this out. (Possibly.) After some trial and error I’m sure I’ll get it. Thanks!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@theducktator Glitter? XD that’s definitely how my dad would feel about the stuff.
@whalekeeper @loopylin @raxforge
Sypher
A field day? So…a day out in a grassy field. Or, not quite a field. The strange faced lady swung herself up in a tree as the earlier chaos ensued.
Ellie appeared beside him, and set her backpack down, one hand…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
*Right. I meant to say right, not left
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Thank you!
Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?
I think she just wants to know what you think of the characters, world, and story. She may have some questions for you to answer once you a…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Whoops! Accidentally tagged myself instead of you
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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