Andrew

@elishavet-pidyon yeahhh Jo doesn’t really fit him.

GE as in Green Ember?

I have no idea. Not a lot of characters are the short, stocky, good with an axe type.

@koshka

Ha. Leo would ask.

Rory

Rory stepped into the break room. “I… I don;t know. Just an engine. An engine that didn’t work…”

He sat down on the couch and stared at his hands. “There were four of us, Leo. It was a new plane they had built. It was like a fighter jet, but a little bigger, and there were two gunners, a pilot, and a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.

No worries. It’s not your fault if Kingdom Pen decided not to notify you.

@linus-smallprint

Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.

@ellette-giselle

Haha, says the guy talking to the lady with 16!

Nice! I only have had 9 in total.

Thanks, I got it.

Your welcome! Thank you for volunteering to read it!

@linus-smallprint

Haha, says the guy talking to the lady with 16!

Thanks, I got it.

@keilah-h

I like it so far. I’m not super immersed in the world yet, but that’s cause I have no idea what the world is, and whether these characters are human or something else.

The only intelligent species in this world is humans. My sister wouldn’t write a book with any other intelligent species in.

A short section like the one at the beg…

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@whalekeeper that’s cool. Since I usually write fanfics, I like to connect it back to something that’s already happened. If a character was, say, shot in the leg once canonically, I might have issues with that come back later (his leg might be stiffer, he might walk with a limp, maybe he even needs a prosthetic because the wound got wor…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I added you. Check your email, it may have went to your spam. It will be from my hotmail account (I have way too many email addresses)

@keilah-h

Yeah. I have an even split of disabilities caused during the stories and before. So many of them have to do with mobility. And then I realized, ‘oh duh, I’m just writing what I know.’ XD

@ellette-giselle

Leo

He blinked in the dim lighting. No good memories, huh. And no childhood either. He’d just have to what he could do about that.

But the kid had been training as a pilot. Had crashed, like Jake. The terror still clung to him too. Leo swallowed and put an arm around the kid’s shoulders.

He let the quiet of the basement deep…[Read more]

@whalekeeper oooh that’s always fun.

@theducktator

Because Alistair is an amazing name. Not fit for a duck-thing.

😂

@elishavet-pidyon

*screech of annoyance*

KP IS NOT NOTIFYING ME AT ALL ABOUT ANYTHING!!!!!

I loved this so much!! It was really, really good! I love your style!

@theducktator

Or combine option A and option B so some characters die, some are permanently wounded, but they did it for a good trade, and so ultimately accept it as a win-win. I love inflicted-and-permanent disability, it’s such a useful trope. (Plus it adds some much-needed disability rep.)

@ellette-giselle But you have to leave at least one alive! Then you can have survivor guilt and mental trauma and all that jazz. And maybe, they can find hope in another book.

I still don’t get how you actually want all your favorite characters to die before the end of the book lol. Like, aren’t there any that you’d rather see live…[Read more]

It says access is denied. Is there any way you can let me on? My Microsoft email is

rosewood.debate658@passinbox.com

@linus-smallprint

AHH!!! NO!!!

I never saw this!!!!!

I was snooping on someone’s profile and tracked a comment down here and that’s how I found it!!! Ugh. KP! I’ll look at this as soon as I can. I try to respond to everything I get tagged for, so if I don’t respond it;’s because I didn’t get the tag.

@theducktator

YES!!! OPTION TWO! EVERYONE DIES!

@theducktator that last one!

I’m all of those how—