Andrew McLaurin

@linus-smallprint

Yay! I was wondering when we would figure out what happened to Martha. I hope Eric gets captured though.

@theshadow

I…have no idea, so I don’t think I’ll be much help. Have you asked your pastor?

@ellette-giselle

I may be TOTALLY off on this, but i feel like you yourself have not gotten into Eric an tried being him. If that makes sense.

This is kind of a funny and ironic thing to say. Of all my characters, I was not expecting you to say this about Eric. Confession time. Most of my characters are me in some way. Alan is my worries, guilt,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

A teenage elder does seem wrong. Looking at the qualifications for an Elder in 1 Timothy 3:1-7 and Titus 1:6-9, they don’t explicitly state any age, and I can see you’ve been setting up Joseph to meet the requirements listed here, but they do seem to require someone who is mature. I don’t think it would be right to trust a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ah, okay.

In that case, I don’t want to dig into it too much at the moment, since his character is going nowhere else in book 1, but I definitely am planning to deal with this in book 2. Maybe I will see if I can add a sense of shame into the end of that last chapter, but that will be it.

Where exactly are you hoping Eric’s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yup. Sure did. My dad was stationed in Italy, and there you travel by REAL trains. With several carriages and an engine. We used to spend our vacations in Edelweiss Germany up in the alps. I’ve also been to Austria, Rome, Greece, and Switzerland. I wish I could do it again now that I’m older and can appreciate it. Although, liv…

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@ellette-giselle

Ugh. It deleted my reply.

Try Ctrl A then Ctrl C before you post your reply to save it to your clipboard in case it decides not to work. Then you don’t have to retype anything. (Make sure you are on the ‘Text’ tab of the text editor.)

I feel like you kinda brushed over the shame thing with Eric, and I’m hoping that’s because he’…

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@liberty

Sorry lib (can I call you that?) I didn’t mean to seem rude after I said,

>=O, How DARE you! I can not believe you would suggest getting rid of our AMAZING cat! He may hunt me and my little sister, but he is a cat. They are MADE to hunt! Besides he has been acting better recently, He will get ready to jump, then run at you. But then stop…

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@liberty @the_lost-journal

I’d join, though I won’t be on much for about 2 weeks, until co-op is over for the semester.

@theshadow

… uhhh sure? …

@ellette-giselle

*gasp*!!!! You stole my book!!!!!!!! How dare you!!!

I dare. And I’ll do it to this one too! Ha ha!!! (Also, you are at 8 exclamation marks now. I think I have good grounds to be concerned.)

Oh my goodness! Did you just say “taking the train to school”!!!! THAT IS AWESOME!!! I used to take trains a lot when I lived in Europe, but…

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@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Next chapter. This was getting a little long and I realized I didn’t have too much planned for chapter the 26th, so I decided to move the climax of the rescue into the next chapter. I should hopefully get that to you by the end of this week.

Chapter the 25th – The Rescue

@ellette-giselle

Listened to the song. I hadn’t heard of this before. The song does fit well.

Yes, it is a time jump!!!! If it’s too jolting, I may split the sections into parts. I’ll see what Linus says.

You could do different parts. Right now, the first part kind of feels like a separate story to what you are getting into now, but you may end…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.

Ah, okay. It’s from a show that people had been recommending to me for a while, and I have finally had a chance to start watching it. The meme fits with the personality of the older character in it well.

Let’s just say, a…

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@linus-smallprint

Oh yeah, I should have made that clearer. 😅

@the_lost-journal

Fun! I was slightly confused with the first section at the end because I did not realize that the portal appeared because of the Storyteller’s writing.

@whalekeeper

I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever. 

You know that reading books like this is the number one cause of cancer in domesticated fr…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.

Ah, okay.

@liberty

Have you talked to your parents about him? I mean, if he is creating that much disturbance, maybe you should just get rid of him and find him a new home.

>=O, How DARE you! I can not believe you would suggest getting rid of our AMAZING cat! He may hunt me and my little sister, but he is a cat. They are MADE to hunt! Besides he has been…[Read more]

@liberty

Let’s tag some people. Who do you think would join?

Hmm, maybe arctic and rae?!

By the way, I was reading over some of the previous posts on “The Chat Chat” and saw the whole cat episode. Woah, is your cat really nasty? Has he ever attacked people before? I’ve had quite some experience with cats and never encountered a “demon cat”, tho…

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