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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I dunno. I like that movie a lot, but it never came to mind while I wrote this scene.
These one sentence time skips aren’t bad, I just have a habit of missing them and then getting confused. Bad habit, that. The whole escape happened so fast and I kept missing things that I had no idea why they were suddenly in the mo…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Why did this section make me think of The Sound of Music?
Two more weeks passed and then came another fall of snow.
These one sentence time skips aren’t bad, I just have a habit of missing them and then getting confused. Bad habit, that. The whole escape happened so fast and I kept missing things that I had no idea why they…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
February 16th
The EmpireLoosing Aelic has been the most heartbreaking thing I have experienced since Adrian’s death. Aelic was such a dear brother, and we all love…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
“For those who don’t understandm, Once upon a side salad, in the floating vegetable continent of Broccolonia, a chicken named Sir Cluckles the Fifth woke up wearing a monocle and speaking fluent Morse code. He wasn’t always so sophisticated—last Tuesday he was just a spoon. Broccolonia was ruled by a jellybean with an MBA named K…
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Idk. I’ve already had all my questions about GE answered.
Maybe what his first story idea was? Or what were some of the most impacted books for him growing up?
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone
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Koshka replied to the topic Is there a trope you don't see very often that you love? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
The Wise Fool is one of my favorites.
Also, that character in the background with more knives than words, that is the first to react to a threat, but the least likely to comment on it. Mikhail Gregovsky from A Light in Zion fit this to a pin. Natan Israeli in Brother Enemy is similar, if more snarky. Smalls from Green Ember is kinda like this to…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
That does it. I’m going to work on this project as hard as I can after I finish the thesis abstract.
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Enid replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m not sure how I feel about what you said, because one of the plot points includes making a brave phone call.
…This is a sign.
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
but the beginning doesn’t include any huge brave decisions because it’s setting up the status quo.
He could make a minor brave decision like a phone call.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
“We should try hunting together. I think it be interesting to see how we would act in the other person’s area or something. I don’t know!”
hey, next time you find yourself in one of the kp roleplays we could try to get them together!
(speaking as myself, not one of the characters lol)
“Nice! So, what is your kill count?! j…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle I can see that.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yes! Agreed.
At least Martin made the right choice. I would argue his death scene was the most frightening one I’ve written.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I’ll stop info dumping on the roleplay forum now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
since I explained Crosshair’s situation though I’ll explain his:
he was just betrayed by his own family. He was adopted, although his adoptive parents are dead, and when he met his biological parents they were literally just like “nope” and ditched him within like an hour, leaving him and the rest of his team alone in a broken down underwater…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper they really are the GOATs.
Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD
LOL!
it’d be weirder if you did have an emotional connection to him with no prior knowledge of what’s going on.
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Enid replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.
Oh don’t get me wrong, I still love it.

And neither of the two guys have met. 😂
And that’s when things get fun, when characters are technically connected but they haven’t met yet
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