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@keilah-h

Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I will try to get you some answers before too long

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ayla

I was trying to decide whether to pretend I was in the Triwizard Tournament or under King Minos’ castle when I noticed a tunnel. I knelt down and peered into it, wishing I had a light. A small girl stared back.

“Hark! A human! Greetings, fellow wander! Whither goest thou?” Hopefully whither was correct. I never could remember the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I will. It’ll be a bit odd this time because I feel like I already asked most of them on LOS. I should have a few though.

@loopylin

Huntress

Felicity awkwardly took Sniper’s handshake before looking around at the maze. “We need to get out of here.”

“You can fly, right?” she addressed Soldier.  “Could you maybe scout out a place we could take shelter for the night?”

He nodded and gave a salute before taking off, his powerful wings causing vortexes to appear in t…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

E, M, 1, 13, Z

@hybridlore

Oh, ok.

@ellette-giselle

Thank YOU for all the help. All of you have been so kind and helpful. Never could have rewritten this without help.

Your welcome! Let me know one you have the feedback questions ready please!

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!! Linus saves the day. Why didn’t I think of that with Flavia? 🤦🏼‍♀️

Good. Good. I’m glad the time skip works.

The person was an acolyte of the priests who saw what happened.

Thank you for sharing your series with us! If I remember correctly, it was just about a year ago that you started posting the first book…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

Still seems kind of ‘as you know’ish.

Something along those lines. What if he says ‘it was a painting from [_____]. Flavia loved the knight in it an…[Read more]