Andrew McLaurin

@ellette-giselle

Something was about to happen that would change everything.

Why was I expecting this to be something positive? It kind of made the event feel like a slap. (Ouch. I’m feeling Josephs pain.) Unless I misunderstood what this event ended up being?

It also feels more tragic because of how casually Eric and Asher headed out. It was…[Read more]

Jenna is also a Christian

New charrie!!!!!!

Jenna (Age 19)

Hazel eyes, light brown hair, skin not as pale as Baron’s.

Her hair is naturally straight, and reaches almost to around her belly button, but she wears it in braids a lot so when its not in braids, it’s usually slightly crimped.

She knows Baron (in fact he has a crush on her) but she will refer to him as Brutus…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Good. I might still check with my sister to see what she thinks, but if you both like it, then I think I might go swap the ending.

@ellette-giselle

So yeah, now Joseph is officially nineteen. I’ll have to let everyone know.

Ooph. That sudden rapid aging has to come with a terribly painful growth spurt.

As for the children and wife thing, I know that Timothy wasn’t married at the time, and he was an elder. (Timothy is kind of my Joseph stencil.) Anyways.

Ah yes, of course, goo…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I simply mean what I described. 👍 I’m not sure how it compares with the rest of your feedback discussions… I have very little context. XD

Okay. I did just post a rewritten version above. So you can also read that and see what you think.

Thanks for the link by the way! I can’t guarantee I’ll read it soon, but now I have it on my rada…

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@ellette-giselle

So I’m not the only one who does this.

I think it comes naturally. We tend to write what we know. One of my friends who plays D&D had a character he tried to make completely different from him. This character was a lying scoundrel, but my friend himself is honest, so his character ended up being more honest than he intended.

I d…

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@ellette-giselle

Whaley asked the original question. XD

@theducktator

I hope Eric gets captured though.

Isn’t that a little harsh? I mean, consider Martha. How do you think she would feel if her brother was captured in order to free her? The poor girl. She will be much happier if she is able to be with one of her family members again in hiding, even if it is his fault she was captured in the first place.

@whalekeeper

my apologies, if you make the earlier chapters available then I will read them 😋

Everything I’ve posted so far should be available in that last link I posted (I just did the link for the chapter a little differently when I was asking for ideas to end it). If you click on Contents in the top left corner, you should get a list of all…[Read more]

@theshadow

I agree with what @raxforge said and would like to add to it.

Not only does God glorify himself through all that he does, he works all things to the good of those who love Him (Romans 8:28). So Satan also exists for our good.

Put it this way. Another question people ask is ‘Why does God allow sin to exist?’ or ‘Why did God create us…[Read more]

@raxforge

Check this out.

@whalekeeper

Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!

@theshadow @whaley

Tenz&Reid

Tenz peeked out from where he hid his face, studying the pictures. Slowly, he unfolded himself, tenderly reaching out to grasp the packet. He studied the pictures much longer this time, looking up every once in a while with his blue…[Read more]

Oh, wait.

I’ve written a script for a small adaptation of Taming of the Shrew, does that count?

This question? I think it counts…

@raxforge

I’m sorry, what question? I’m kind of behind on replies here on account of school.

@raxforge

For fun or for school?

@whalekeeper

Thanks! We probably will watch the BBC version. It’s Challenge 2 homework for me as well.