Andrew

@ellette-giselle

As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?

And Jim too?

…but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks! No problem.

Also I’m too engaged by the story and characters to stop and comment on it, so take that as a good sign. Looking forward to seeing where this story will go!

Wow!! Cool!

As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?

And Jim too?

Also preparing for my own vacations starting tomorrow, so I probably w…

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@hybridlore

I have finished The Color of Hope and quite enjoyed it. I’ve been quite busy with work lately, and am going on vacation right away. I will get to answering your feedback questions when I get back!

@ellette-giselle

I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for…[Read more]

@loopylin

My characters tend to be blurry, yeah. Some more than others. If I’ve drawn the character before, then I’ll picture an version of the drawing, just in motion. A lot of the time I just picture the motion itself, abstract, or a roughly scratched drawing. Just realized I see 70% of my charries as animated, not real life. XD

Also because…[Read more]

@whalekeeper YOU SHOULD! That would be so cute!

No one will know those characters cause I haven’t talked much about them yet but they’re awesome.

@elishavet-pidyon That was really good!

@ellette-giselle

The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.

Funny enough I always kinda assumed it was a LOTR fanfic that turned into its own thing, because the names o…[Read more]

@esther-c

Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?

What Sara said about adding in the other siblings a bit more. Most of them I couldn’t name or differentiate. Granted, I can barely keep track of my own siblings. XD

I loved Easton and Autumn! They’re so sweet and loving, and I can totally imagine them as grandparents…[Read more]

@loopylin

I need to think about the fear responses.

How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?

I’m tempted to say they’d all be fine since they don’t seem to have much in the way of brains…XD

Ryla would try to feed them baked goods instead of brains and would die.

Ardon would probably die trying to protect Ryla, but if he…[Read more]

@liberty

Well, that was fast!!! I am so glad that you liked it!!! Woah! Favorites list!??! That’s saying something when I know the kind of things you read!!

Well thanks so much for skimming it! I’ll take a look at the comments. May email you a few things after I do! Yes, I have a playlist. I’ll email that too.

@elishavet-pidyon  @koshka

Honestly! You two need this published!

The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.

@grcr take as long as you need. Don’t stress yourself out over me, please.

@liberty

also, if you would let me know on KP how far you get each day that would be great so I can look over the comments. Word doesn’t tell me what comments are new and it will save me having to weed through them all. XD

@liberty

Yay! Oooo! So glad you like the boards!

Maybe if I watched the Spiderman movie again, I’d have a different opinion. It’s been a while. That’s what I remember.

@the_lost-journal

I did not notice you asked questions, my apologies!

So how could a death help the plot?

I feel like it really depends on the plot itself. I know that’s a vague answer and isn’t helpful. XD But there are so many different character arcs and plots out there, so I can’t come up with rules for every one of them. Just think of a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon lol thanks

@liberty Cool!

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s a very pretty scene, as well as being sad. I love it.