Andrew

@ellette-giselle

I’m trying to fill out these feedback questions before I lose track of what’s happening. *Types furiously*

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

I say remove the part about tragedy striking, and only…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Wow!! That was fast!

Okay awesome! I’d love to see your answers to the questions!

Hmm, I guessed you might be the one to bring that up. I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I think it may end up one of those impasses like…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Someone has been snooping. SHHHH!

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For anyone having trouble with the link, try this.

https://1drv.ms/w/c/9ff685038eab87a7/EZpJYAN7WMFClAq3I3Au900Bqv9Jwzbpj8dVtZtnGjUIRA?e=Waa6sd

@theshadow

I don’t tend to listen to Rock, so I’m not the best one to answer this. XD

@theshadow

Instead of giving you a direct answer, I am going to give you a few things to think through from both sides of the argument.

I don’t believe that just because something has been invented by a Godless person does not mean it is wrong. Consider this: If we take a look at the book of Genesis, it was Jubal who invented instruments.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m back from vacation and I have finished your book!

Sorry for the lack of comments. Often, while I was reading it, I didn’t even have Wi-fi or Data, so most of my feedback will be my answers to your questions I found on page 15 of this forum.

Overall, it was an exciting story with interesting characters. I can see why…[Read more]

also what did you do to the URL to get it to temporarily admin-ify you?

@linus-smallprint It’s cool how you took classes or something for this kinda thing!

That would be cool too, I’d totally give my feedback if you did it.

@whalekeepe @hybridlore @keilah-h @esther-c

I would stay away from things like WIX. I can’t remember what it was, but while they are easier to make, there were reasons my instructors gave me to avoid these. Security might have been one of them. (Then again, Kingdom Pen isn’t. Because of my knowledge of WordPress, I was able to find an admin login…[Read more]

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The Numbered and the Nameless.docx

@ellette-giselle ohhhh ok!

cool emblem too!

@liberty

YES!!! It is!!

Well, Leo is actually Koshka’s character, so no, he won’t be here. Someone else will step in to fill that roll.

Yes, S5 characters are still along for the ride.

Duel POVS.

@keilah-h

Nope.

^Are they siblings/cousins.

@keilah-h

You mean, are Cassion and Rory siblings or cousins, or are they related to Book 1 characters?

@ellette-giselle I don’t know, but they look pretty similar, so….

@keilah-h

related in what way?

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And, because I know some of you will ask,

The Emblem on the uniforms of  Sector 1 soldiers.

@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!

Are they related? or no?

Looks like they’re defectors from the army!

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CASSION!!!