Andrew

@linus-smallprint

What is up with KP? I haven’t gotten any notifs.

No. You’re fine to keep it in. Instead of feeling like it something I needed to get over for the next part, this felt more like setting the stage for the climax.

Okay, that makes sense.

Do you ever get your dad to look over these sermon/speeches?

My dad actually hasn’t r…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

The Protector-Gabriel

“The Fourth Protector. He painted the broken chains on my mask. I am the Fifth, I painted on the flower.”

@ellette-giselle ohhh, I understand now.

(I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣)

Just cause you’re a woman doesn’t mean you can’t write impactful things.

Like yeah, the Bible specifically says that only men should be pastors cause it mirrors them being fathers and heads of hou…[Read more]

@whalekeeper lollllll yes

@ellette-giselle

Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

No. You’re fine to keep it in. Instead of feeling like it something I needed to get over for the next part, this felt more like setting the stage for the climax.

(I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣)

Do you ever get your dad to look ov…[Read more]

@theducktator oh that’s interesting, my dad is going on a plane trip tomorrow too! Not that early though.

I’ll be praying for both of them.

@loopylin

Okay, I REALLY want to add in a second character I made…. But idk if we’re allowed two charries….

@rae

Prince Leander

“I could last the rest of my life in this maze if I wanted to!-… which I don’t! but still!” Leander blushed a little. “It’s fine! We can’t wait! Besides, we’ve wasted so much time it’s probably gonna be night soon, anyway.” Leander huffed, and leaned on the wall again. “And listen, I don’t really care for anyone here,…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

The Protector-Gabriel

“The mask was inherited from my mentor.” Despite Leander’s agitated tone, Gabriel’s voice remained the same calm, measured tone. “I also object to you going alone. You are too reckless. You wouldn’t last a day in my line of occupation. If you so wish, we can go just the two of us, and leave everyone else…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Me exactly! 🥲😀….

@rae

Prince Leander

Leander snapped his head back to Gabriel. He was already sick of this person. “I already know that.” Leander said angrily. “That won’t listen to me anyway… no one would!” Leander sighs. “And you think your ears are sharp? I’ve got these!” Leander grabbed one of his ears. Leander could tell that Gabriel wouldn’t be…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!!!

It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…

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@the_lost-journal

The Protector-Gabriel

Gabriel sighed. “People don’t follow princes who make fun of them. Also, I advise you be careful what you say under your breath. I have sharp ears.”

@loopylin

just a random question…. how many characters can we have…? Is the limit one? Or two? I think two would be fine… but maybe no? I don’t know… But yea!

@loopylin

Hey, you read my mind! I was going to say that the hedges did something like this when anyone tried to climb/go through them, but I forgot. Glad you thought of it :]

Wow! I thought you were tagging me to say that was a “no-no”.  XD but huh! I guess great minds think alike! 😎

@rae

Prince Leander

Leander looked back at Gabriel, he was…[Read more]

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint    @hybridlore

Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.

mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.

Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…

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