@rae
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
ooo this gets me excited!!!! 😆 it sounds so magically beautiful!!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@rae can start if she wants, I really dont know how to start it either 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @rae @acancello
I think that @rae should start bc she knows the most about Lillen. But that’s just me XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol. I like the descriptions you posted of nature!
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Aranel started the topic Killing Characters in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
@euodia-vision @trailblazer @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @acancello @esther-c @jonas @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @power @rae and anyone else:
What are some good reasons to kill MCs? I have to kill two of them in this one scene because if I don’t, the only option is to use a Deus ex machina, or throw out the scene.
Basically, two characters are…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @rae @acancello
I’m not an expert in the field of fantasy so I’ll probably wait for someone else to get the ball rolling… but if no one else does anything I could just have Kari test the door to see if it opens. They probably should have some direction from someone on what they’re…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I can’t really, cause my character is still separate from everyone else.
I think we just need someone to get things going. If nobody has anything they specifically want to happen before they leave the house, someone should just go for it and start them on there way. How will they know where to go?
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Aranel replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
I pronouce genre as GEN-ear and puree as PUR-ee. I do pronounce caramel correctly though! Which is odd considering me. I also have some kind of accent that my best friend notified me of this week. She has no idea what it is though.
Hmm. I’ve never heard anyone pronounce them that way before!
Yes, though not the last one all the way…
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Power replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@rae Oh, there have been may wars, battles, and fights. (The Battle of Foggs Stand, The Siege and Burning of Fenton, The Siege of Newfenton, The War of Wolvish Hostility, The Tine Mountain War, ect).
It would really depend on what part of the country, the creatures, and the culture. The Cheetah shock troops from Consistent (A city named after a…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Alrighty… Here is another RP from my boys….
Lane
“What now?” (I’m picking up from what Kari said…btw)
Lane turned towards Kari and thought for a moment. We should just wait. We need instructions. We’ll have to wait. M…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@rae The Miska Chronicles, but it’s more like a WOFC (Work in the Filing Cabinet)
I have only been able to discover/learn about 350-500 years of Miskan history, but most of that knowledge generally falls within the last 130 year. (This was when a brilliant ruler (I believe it was Queen Esma the Loyal, but don’t quote me on that.) final came to…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh, he’s really fascinating! I enjoy how his backstory is intertwined with his present.
Does his scarring play a half symbolic role? For instance, I also have a character who bears intense burn scars from an incident when he was a child. (Although they’re on his hands, feet, and neck [the burns on his face were light and did not scar])…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@rae
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, nice job!
They are not trained in war. How long will the dragons rampage their land unhindered?
If these people think that all the people they pulled in are trained in combat, they’re in for a rude awakening lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Wow. That was beautiful. XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Zahlin is somewhere around 6’6”
Goodness, he’s tall!
Btw what’s this place like?
Do you mean the house itself or Lillen? If you mean the house, it’s basically a mansion with various unexplored rooms if you mean Lillen, the world that the house magically teleported to, I’m not sure. Its @rae ‘s world, so you’d have to ask h…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh and the paragraph about heaven and hell didn’t seem too preachy. I mean, I think it’s fine to have it in there since it was really short. Great job on the description of that, too! I think it works well.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.
I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there on the controls? And then Nahim stabilized it and went to yell at…[Read more]
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