Ruth

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Is this a typo?

Fetch her! And you will not, I can

I assume it was supposed to be ‘if’ not ‘and’

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😭😭😭😭😭😭 (oh dear, I almost put a barfing emoji in there)

@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @rae I’m so sorry I took so long to get around to this y’all 🙁

Tyler

I blinked, racking my brain for any locations that matched Duvaal and The Sultaian desert, but couldn’t recall any.

But that’s not surprising. I never have been exactly good at geometry…

“I don’t think I’ve heard of that before,” I said q…[Read more]

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We need a Koshtin POV. No hurry though.

Tagging some people! I know this was created a while ago but we really do need a solid world building thread.

@calyhuge @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian @godlyfantasy12 (yes I am still consistently tagging u) @keilah-h @jonas @rae

@rae

Yeah, I was a little worried about that…do you think it would help if I gave Brenna’s master a name? The young soldier must remain unnamed, for my own reasons, but I could give the master a name. I’ll rearrange the paragraphs so it’s easier to understand what’s going on.

Yeah, I think that would help a lot.

For the title, maybe “Murderer”?

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

Ugh! I forgot about this today. Sorry! I’ll get to it as soon as I can!

@rae

Nice! I like it.

Note this typo:

Furious, with leader of the caravan

I think you meant “the” instead of “with.”

Maybe also establish who the POV character is sooner. I was a bit confused for the first few paragraphs because I couldn’t tell.

The only other thing I would say is that the title could be tweaked. The name doesn’t feel quite…[Read more]

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Yeah, I noticed the same thing as Freedom. It did get a little confusing. But overall it’s really good!

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Oooh I like it!

@rae

yeah, sorry, My brain kinda died.

No, you’re fine. XD

Fynn

Fynn shoved his hands into his pockets as they fell into an awkward silence. Thankfully, he didn’t have to come up with anything to say as he saw Callista by the front doors standing next to a girl with blue hair and horse of the same color.

“Hey, Callie!”

She looked up and smi…[Read more]

@keilah-h

You can do a lot of things with an AI, but it depends on the model, and how you phrase a lot of things. I had to phrase it as a “game” for ChatGPT, otherwise it would say that it doesn’t have opinions, and I had to tell it to not list different views, because the point is to pit two different views against one another. GPT is also quite…[Read more]

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lol 😅 I’ve been making characters since 2017, but the 335+ are from the last four years.

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

I forget too. XD We can just pretend Ami and Clint have met up with Bucky and Riya already, if you guys are ok with that.

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(btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers. 😉 Sorry I didn’t explain that earlier. 😅)

Fynn

“Thanks. I-I’m from Shyton.” Chase paused for a moment. “You?”

“Huh, never heard of Shyt…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @jonas @rae

Do it lol

😆

h ttps://www.mote.com/m/darsdx5 (delete the space after the h)

Let me know if it doesn’t work.

@savannah_grace2009

I love it so far! The prose is beautiful, and the story is so good!

Yay! I’m glad!

@esther-c

Oh yeah ofc. I saw the post and I was like, “Welp, Euodia will probably want to hear all about this.” 😂

Haha, you know me very well. 😂

@rae

I think Andy should have gotten an award for how well he played Gollum.

AGREED!!!

@rae

There’s twelve, not seven planets, but that can be easily edited so it’s not a problem.

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

I know. I’ll try to write something tomorrow.

@rae

Awww thanks!

@rae

Cumberbatch is just one of a very select few actors I actually know the names of, in most cases I’d be clueless, lol!