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-GRCR- replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae @jonas nooo this rp must not die, I’m having way too much fun roleplaying with Snake lol
I’m currently tracing a little comic strip I found of him and his girlfriend (well, wife at the point where you guys are seeing him lol) just goofing off. (since he’s not my charrie by default I can go looking for other people’s fan art and modify it to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m assuming you’re looking for feedback on this?
The only thing I would say is perhaps give Nahim a better reason to think that there was a traitor. You currently have him thinking that the place couldn’t have been taken if there wasn’t one, and maybe from an in-universe point of view that’s true, but I think to the reader it feels lik…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I was meaning to read your previous version, but I was so far behind that it was a daunting task to begin, so this is perfect!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I really would meet up with your charries (those two are so fun together!!) but I’m writing three POVs right now and I don’t want to fill up all the social circles, if that makes any sense 😅
🤣 I’m dying that was great
🤣😎 I don’t usually say this bc everyone says it lolz, but Seb controls his POV more than any other charrie…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Nice! Is this a new draft? It feels different from the version I’ve already read.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
It is so fun juggling these POVs 🤣🤣 I need to update my other charries, but I have a feeling they’ll throw me off.
Marcel
Marcel glanced up. “Huh.”
“What?”
“No one here has asked me before.” Somehow it struck him as both funny and obvious. He paused, unsure of how to start, then held up a hand for Chase to wait.
Chase watched with…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@trailblazer @jonas @rae @highscribeofatherium @beth-torres @anyone-else-in-this-rp-that-I-missed
So, I’m going to take my characters out of this RP. I haven’t really been RPing here a lot, and I just added some characters to the Castle. I’m might jump back in later, but idk. Just wanted to let y’all know. 🙃
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @rae @princessachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @is-that-everyone?
Alright…
I think I’m gonna rejoin the castle. 😏
I have no idea what happened to the characters I left in here. XD
So I’m just going to pretend they are no longer there. Lol. I’m adding in Everton and Adrian. Because this mind end up disa…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ah, that’s too bad ☹️ I’m usually the last person in my family to get sick too…except my dad who just doesn’t get sick sometimes (cheater!) But I also seem to get the most sick a lot of times, although other times I don’t get very sick at all.
I hope anyone in your family who’s still sick feel better soon!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
You too!!
Does that mean you or someone else have also been sick?
Hope you feel better
Thanks! I’m definitely on the mend. Thursday was my worst night, but each morning my throat feels super clogged. I have to play piano in church tomorrow and since I’ve been on vacation, I haven’t been able to practice for a week, so hopefully I’m at least n…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
We are in a bit of a slump. I’ve been on vacation this week, plus I’ve been sick the last couple days, so I’ve been feeling mentally drained. We get back tonight, and I’m going to try to be more active on this RP.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcel
For some reason, Marcel felt a little hurt.
Yes, Chase was a sunless introvert. He didn’t mean anything by it – but then, had he really found anything valuable in their little conversation?
…Not that it was actually valuable.
Probably wasn’t.
So Marcel did the only thing he knew how. He shrugged and stared out the window. His f…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcel
“I know one of them. The tiny blond one, on the inside.” Marcel lifted his chin, trying to get a better look. “He… wow.”
Sebastian didn’t look too happy. Without the kooky enthusiasm he had shown at the cafeteria yesterday, he hunched over his ice cream with soulless, shifting eyes.
“What – What about the others?” Chase asked.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m sorry, it was supposed to be Marcel not Sip, i just was… idk. I have no idea what I was doing (obviously).
I knew what you meant XD
Marcel
“My friends say it’s weird. I look like a giant cricket…”
Chase was only half listening; he also watched the group of boys nearby.
Marcel stifled what he had been about to say. “Do you want to…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
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Beth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh okay! That sounds so awesome.
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