Ruth

@rae

Thanks! That’s helpful to consider!

@jonas @rae @loopylin

Flare and Ben Gunn – Elderstrand (w/ Baron, Jenna, and Ellis going to follow Felicity)

“That’s awfully spic- HOLY!!” Ben said as he turned around staring at the swarm of creatures.

Flare turned around with Ben, “Why do I have to be out of spells?”

The swarm started to get closer to them. Ben nodded, “We should r…[Read more]

@raxforge @rae @loopylin

Ellis – Elderstrand (w/ Ben, Flare, Baron, following Felicity and Brea)

“Whatever made that sound,” Ellis said, glancing backward. “I don’t–Brutus! Come on! We’ve got to get out of here!”

He stopped, turning around. Just then with the sound of pounding feet, he saw a swarm of bounding spindly creatures burst into the…[Read more]

@rae

Okay! Thanks for letting me know!

@savannah_grace2009

Great!

@raxforge

Sure thing. I’m thinking of giving everyone two weeks. I’ll wait a few more days to hear back from others, and then announce the deadline on Thursday.

@rae lol I don’t wanna change my name cause it’s the same as my tag and I like it matching….

Neither will I change my profile pic. I’m too attached to Tech.

@rae

I hopped on the trend, obviously *flips hair*

And the signature is from How to Train Your Dragon (the episodes)

@raxforge thanks!

@rae my characters aren’t super well fleshed out yet either but I’ll give it a go with what I have

Ellie (16)- She has a compassionate heart and is deeply moved by the issue of human trafficking. Also has a good sense of discernment. (It’s her older sister who was kidnapped as a young child, but I haven’t decided if I want her…[Read more]

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity

So, I thoug…[Read more]

@rae thanks!

@koshka

It’s okay Keilah. The other day I called one of my characters something like “my little wolf child” and “baby”.

My older sister looked at me with this blank stare and asked who I was talking about because “Isn’t he the soldier?”

lolllll

I’ve never called one of my charries “baby.” It was honestly a huge stretch to call…[Read more]

@rae

LOVE IT!!

If Max and his family get hurt because if Rya…………. I’m not going to like you very much.

I really love how this story is going!!! It’s so, so good!

btw, one thing I noticed was Ruby started calling the girl by name while talking to Baron, but he never said her name. So, either that was a glitch on your end, or she saw…[Read more]

Tagging people I seem to remember using magic before. I’m not sure if y’all are the right people, I apologize if you aren’t. @godlyfantasy12 @rae @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009

@rae lol I don’t mind posting old drawings, but only to a point. Before 2021 most were kinda cringey. There were a few gems though.

Anything TF2 related is from 2024 though so….

but anyway, here’s Demo with his wings spread and his sword in hand!

@rae AHAHAHAHAHAHA

That’s too funny.

My parents know I love to make creatures and honestly? They don’t mind. But my dad loves sci-fi books so that’s probably why. My brother thinks some of them are weird, but he loves others. He has his own, too, and they’re really cool.

They don’t know much about Soldier as a character (I haven’t shared the…[Read more]

@rae lolll yes Soldier is definitely involved.

I’d love to see it! Bad drawing or not. I’m terrible at scenes too, don’t worry.

It was actually supposed to be the scene of them fighting the giant bread monster but just doing Soldier teleporting bread will be funny!

I’ll post some pics of him so you can have references.

@rae

My pages are covered in random notes about everything, from worldbuilding to plot, and then I don’t look back at them, and forget what’s going on.

@rae

Ah yes. Some writers talk about their super organized notes, and I’m just like “I have a head. And some notes here…or maybe over there…”

Tags!

@ellette-giselle @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @rae @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @grcr @the_lost-journal @jonas @linus-smallprint @IthinkIgotmostactivepeoplebutI’mnotsuresoifIforgotyouI’msorry

@rae

You’re welcome!

Ah, ok thanks for the explanations 👍

@rae

I haven’t read the second part yet, but I’ll critique the first section first.

Keep in mind that this is all my opinion, and you can ignore what you want.

Your first sentence is good. I don’t have any critique for it.

The second sentence has a couple things.

Halfbreed of man and elf, Max lacked the pointed ears and the knifelike sharp…

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