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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m so sorry that this took so long! I hope it helps!
“Nahim. Nahim!”
Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old [this is shown when Nahim thinks about how long ago the accident was] friend’s hidden face. “Nahim, what’s up?”
[how does Nahim react to Mandin waving his hand in front of his face? does he tell him to stop? does…[Read more] -
Beth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay! Lol
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It lagged, so I didn’t see your post, but I edited in a reply.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lol
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m not counting names.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I though he was Gunslinger.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
When you think about it, ruthless is a strange word. All the other -less words I can think of are attached to another real word, but ruth isn’t a word as far as I know.
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whaley replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh noooooo 😂🤣 Luckily she has not lost a Ruth, that would be sad.
Sorry for not replying earlier guys.
Thrift
Thrift breathed hard into her collar. “We’re working together, right? I hope?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
lol
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Beth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
😂 That was funny
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @beth-torres
Who wants to go next?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m thinking you wouldn’t see the various heroes becoming Dark Lords. That would be the background of the story, and the main characters would be after that, but I am not sure.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
A compliment if anything. I have complained about @highscribeofaetherium‘s excessively long tag in the past.
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
I’m in!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
Messed up your tag.
Thanks! (Yeah, @rae somehow passed me! But no one else ever has!)
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
The basic idea is this: Long ago, the Dark Lord arose. He was defeated, but the hero that defeated him became a new Dark Lord. This repeats again and again.
Might sound kind of basic, and I’m guessing that some variation of this twist has been done before, but I think there are some cool things I could do with this.
I got this idea from lotr.…[Read more]
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m so sorry giving you my thoughts on Ch 2 is taking so long, I’m kinda busy with the holidays lol and it’s been taking me a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@rae @everyone
I’ll join! I’m on EST too. I can’t do Wednesday nights, but I think I’m pretty free aside from that.
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thank youuuu, my brain is a little dead for some reason so I actually couldn’t think of that many tags. XDD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m CST.
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