Ruth

@rae no, not at the moment.

@rae

Wow, ten ppl are on rn?

@beth-torres

I have a villain that isn’t doing anything right now, but he avoids fighting as much as he can and would especially avoid attacking someone like Carrie, unless she were for some reason to attack him first. @rae also could bring in Jeptune, and @highscribeofaetherium has the Shadow, but I can’t think of any others that aren’t alrea…[Read more]

@rae

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.

Alrighty, awesome! 👍

I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our…

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@loopylin

XD Sorrryyyyy

@rae

Hugo

“I wish. Unfortunately my baby brother? Seb? He was the second to discover how people change. It depends on your long-term mental state, not whatever you want. And most of the time, these changes slowly intensify your worst beliefs… To use his words.”

They stood still now. Hugo hooked his thumbs in his…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom

Reminder! We’re planning to smash that record into the dust at 5 EST/4 CST/3 MST/2 PST.

@rae

Hugo

Realn sounded like a fairy story.

“…Here I am talking so much! What of your culture?” Nar laughed, her curls thrown around her face, like a windswept flower.

She looked like a fairy too. Just a little.

“My culture?” Hugo blinked, and hesitated. “Um… let’s see.”

Nar probably thought he was looking for words. She stared up at him…[Read more]

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @hybridlore @loopylin @trailblazer @rae @janellebelovedpig @felicity @karissa-chmil @landric @booksbyjayna  @everyone!
I DID IT!! I’M DONE WITH THE ROUGH DRAFT OF MY FIRST NOVEL!!!!!!!

Oh my gosh this is so…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl

Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]

@rae

I’ve been meaning to read this for a while and I finally got to it!! I only got to read the first chapter, but my brain is too dead to give any valuable feedback right now. Love it so far!!

@freedomwriter76

Awww, Erichhh! 😭

But he sounds like such a cool POV to write from. 👀

@mineralizedwritings

I always love reading your writing. 😊 I feel like writing in present tense in becoming more popular now, at least in ya fiction, and I really enjoy it. I tried it once for a short story and failed miserably. 😂 But I might try it in a…[Read more]

@rae Nahim has a metal arm? Cool!!

(IDK why but I think charries with mechanical parts are really cool)

@rae

Hugo

“Oof.” Hugo wrinkled his nose again, and scowled. “I don’t do strict.”

Nar sighed dramatically. “Well… if that’s how it is…”

“Okay, I’m just kidding.” Hugo couldn’t play the serious part for more than a minute before breaking out in a smile, made of dazzling sunshine. It was just impossible. “All those traditions and rituals sound s…[Read more]

@smiley @freedomwriter76 @grcr

Thank you! I used a reference

@rae Thanks for the tips! I don’t think I have a scanner printer so I might just outline and color it digitally.

@whalekeeper

nooo they’re MY children

@rae

Oh my gosh Nae is so cute <333 XD

@loopylin

Those two children of yours are the cutest, I just wanna give Lois a hug…

@rae

Hugo

“Heeey, I’ve got it! Okay – watch this -”

Hugo tried again, this time by himself. He made it almost to the end, but slipped up, and finished with a goofy swing freestyle. His feet tapped rhythmically as he tilted his head to one side, grinnin…[Read more]

(Something glitched so I’m reposting)

@whalekeeper

I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.

Well, I am going evReWHrE because my family always has a ton of crazy plans for the holidays. Which is great. But stressful. I’m tired.

ANYWAYs…

@rae @whaley

Hugo and Nar are being so adorable rn what the heck

&…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.

Well, I am going evReWHrE because my family always has a ton of crazy plans for the holidays. Which is great. But stressful. I’m tired.

ANYWAYs…

@rae @whaley

Hugo and Nar are being so adorable rn what the heck

Felicity

Felicity walked casually around the chatt…[Read more]

@rae

Hugo

Nar had all the elegance of a nightclub performer back home.

When she finished, Hugo clapped his hands together. “Flexible and agile are my two middle names, sister. Okay, you start like this, right?…”

He wasn’t a perfect learner. Only one step at an time. Unlike his rascal brother, who could picture a hundred moves ahead in his min…[Read more]

@Rae (forgot to tag you earlier lol)

Also, what is the end goal of your plot? Reuniting the galaxy and reversing what Grathmere did while working with him? I recommend making Grathmere somewhat morally relatable (think Edmund Dantes from The Count of Monte Cristo)