Ruth

@godlyfantasy12 forgot to tag you😅🫠

Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅

@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]

@theshadow

Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.

@theshadow

Great! 😁

Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thank you!!

@hybridlore

All caught up now. It’s good so far, though I have two thoughts. I think you could maybe show more of the oppression in Christianity/religion and the society a bit more? Specifically beyond the school and the laundromat, because it would make it feel a bit more alive. Second, maybe you could show Sara’s feelings of purposelessness…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The pocket thing. XD

Leo

The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.

Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.

Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*Gasp of joy*

He’s perfectly amazing. I love the goggles. They may now end up in his character design. And the tools. Yes. XD

Kinda want to change my profile pic now…

*Suddenly realizes I’ve never done an aesthetic for Leo. Or his book*

@liberty

I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂

Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD

I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.

Thanks!

I am curious, though. How did Timon a…

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@esther-c

Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊

Awwww ofccc!!!!

That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m not stealing any of that author’s ideas, I promise!!! just some of the vibes in certain s…

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But just to clarify, I don’t really ever listen to secular music. I only want to listen to music that glorifies God!

@the_lost-journal

What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)

I don’t think i…[Read more]

@esther-c

Found it! 🙃

Oh wow, that was a bit of a lore dump

I want to contribute, but this isn’t really advice, because I’m not that experienced. (Disclaimers, disclaimers, you get the drift.)
I enjoy making an environment that challenges the character. That way, even if the villain is average, I can make up an elaborate floor-plan for the fight.

In Baztet, the city is colorful and fun, but it also has a…[Read more]

@rae

I really wish i could draw like that.

Giiirrl, stop roasting yourself. Thank you, though!

@the_lost-journal

👍

@savannah_grace2009

You’re totally welcome!

@theducktator

Ok! That will be something I’ll add to my notes. 👍

@grcr

Yay! Thank you!!

@savannah_grac2009

Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊

That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m no…[Read more]

@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOK

I JUST KNOW IT

*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)

ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD