RAE

@hybridlore

(You already killed off Aaron. Isn’t that enough for you?? 😭)

*gasp* how dare you! I never killed Aaron. The Empire did.

So there.

But honestly there are times when you can’t get around it. I’m not killing characters just to be depressing or violent. I’m doing it for good reasons. Plus, I have to follow the rules of my world. It w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I love stories where good characters die. It’s so refreshing after all this impossible happily ever after on earth for everyone we might have liked plus some.

😳😳😳😳

You love stories where good characters DIE???

Ok, I see what you’re getting at. Every story doesn’t need to be a happy ever after, but it shouldn’t be depress…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ah, well, we don’t always get our way.

Don’t do this to your readers. Your book will get thrown across the room. He needs to be rescued. Maybe Julian should help him escape.

lololol,

I wouldn’t throw my books across the room. I love stories where good characters die. It’s so refreshing after all this impossible happily ever a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Anyway. I need to go do some school but I found the old forum where you posted parts of the first book, so I’ll be catching up on that later.

@ellette-giselle

Exactly!! Jk. Kind of. I think we need Adrian/Julian by themselves. Unless that’s not realistic for what they would let a prisoner do… idk.

I know! Poor Julian. And now he thinks his brother is going to die..(which he CAN’T!)

why? what’s stopping me?

I WILL! 😤 Anyway, you already killed off Aaron. Don’t do this to your readers.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

And I am not satisfied with the confrontation. They need another scene. *plops down stubbornly* I really love brother dynamics … 😅

ME TOO! I love brother dynamics.

So what your saying is, Julian didn’t yell at him enough and should do some more?

lolololol.

Poor Julian, he must be so hurt and confused.

Anyway. You CANNOT kill A…

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@ellette-giselle

Nope. Nothing. One reaction to that scene.

Yes, I am getting attached to Adrian! He is so sweet to Joseph! And I am not satisfied with the confrontation. They need another scene. *plops down stubbornly* I really love brother dynamics … 😅

Anyway. You CANNOT kill Adrian too. 😖

@hybridlore

That’s it.

That’s all you have to say? Nothing about my skilled word choice and flowing verbs!

(lololololol 100% joking!)

Are you getting attached to Adrian?

Btw, there was your Julian/Adrian confrontation. Did it go how you expected?

@ellette-giselle

Ellette, if you kill off Adrian too… 😭😤

And then I go and hide because I feel like Koshka is going to have it out for me.

@hybridlore

Thanks, it’s not that I feel ashamed, it’s that I feel like I am being self absorbed and selfish just asking for prayer for myself.

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NEXT SECTION!!!!!!

The days passed one by one. Adrian remained in hiding, and Joseph spent more and more time with him, listening as he told stories of his early childhood with his brother– the days before the army.

Adrain spent hours in study, and Joseph was often at his side, re…

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@liberty

Thank you so much!!!!

@the_lost-journal

Of course! Don’t feel ashamed to ask for prayer. No one’s life is perfect and we all have stuff going on.

@liberty

Oh my goodness!! Can you send me a link!!!!???

@ellette-giselle

✨Death✨

O.o

Is it just me or are the prompts getting progressively more violent

I have some good stuff tho

Gak! Peter and Ruben’s sister. Not brother.

@jonas

Or I can help contrive something to let that happen if you want.)

That would work!

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Please tag anyone who was involved in this that I forgot to tag!!! And sorry if I’m spamm…[Read more]