Ruth

@keilah-h

well not cool for the character that dies but still lol

Not entirely sure why this was so funny to me, but congratulations on making me snort-laugh.

Nobody try to assassinate me please, but I think I might have just maybe reconfigured a certain sci-fi book out of YA and into upper middle-grade/young youth and it is so beautiful now and everything works so shockingly well I might be replotting the whole thing. Maybe. If I go with it.

It is really beautiful.

*Hysterical laughter*

But I also…[Read more]

@rae

Huntress

Gabriel fought with the creature for a minute as I tried my best to avoid being struck by them both.

It was clear that we were at a distinct disadvantage–it could sense us through the fog, whether it was using sight, or hearing, or something else weird like infrared sense.

“You said we gotta go for the tail?” I asked.

Gabriel…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle cool!!

well not cool for the character that dies but still lol

@keilah-h

thanks!! They are actually side characters. My MC is as intriguing as it gets. XD

@loopylin  @rae

on the flip side, they are your classic sweet, shy, sentimental type couple, so even a song that would fit them that way could work.

@ellette-giselle ooooo that sounds like an intriguing story!

@loopylin  @rae

Well, he ends up in the Nazi S.S. through some bad choices in his younger days, then has his salvation arch and finds out that his childhood sweetheart is Jewish. So he loves her but can’t marry her… and then he has to leave. So tragic and sad and separated and even him dying sort of song would fit.

as for the type of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I have plenty of music. Specifically what kind of tragic?

@keilah-h

ah. bother.

@ellette-giselle I wish I did, but my music listening is…not that varied admittedly.

@keilah-h

Haha! Right?!?

@ellette-giselle Thanks!

I saw some artist/writer on the internet who said “Aren’t we all just God’s OCs?” and I was like “wait a minute that actually kinda makes sense. but does that mean Jesus was the self-insert protagonist?”

DOES ANYONE HAVE A GOOD THEME SONG FOR A TRAGIC COUPLE?!?!

Something like a last farewell or something??! I have been searching for over a month. It started out as “oh that would be cool if they had a theme song” and turned into “they MUST have one just because I can’t find one.” lolol

So, anyone have a good one?

@keilah-h …[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow!

That was a pretty cool way to think of it.

@power yep pretty much.

@rae

Oooo! Like the mech. The detail is amazing (and the shine on the metal is 👌)

(Also, with that spike, better hope that thing doesn’t use you/your car as a chair. 😬 😅)

I ran into these verses a while back and easy like “YES”! ✊️
Take the enemies own weapon and use it to destroy him and undo all his work! 🤣😂🤣😂
Hebrews 2:14-15 ESV — Since therefore the children share in flesh and blood, he himself likewise partook of the same things, that through death he might destroy the one who has the power of death, that i…[Read more]

Good vs evil, magic system, ultimately sacrifice of the main character (That ends up cheating death), redemption arc, relatable characters that make mistakes, complete and epic win by good in the end. . . It’s amazing how it check all “our” boxes for a good story. Isn’t it interesting that we like those aspects in a story (for some reason 🤷‍♂️)?…[Read more]