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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life.
ehhh that’s characters in morally compromised settings for ya though.
Even your absolute favorite will most likely always, always say something that you don’t quite agree with if their plot has to do with them dealing with, or being, questionable people.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
haha.
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Enid replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!
I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.
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Enid replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back
Yes please.
Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?
Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?
I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator    @grcr
( @kyronthearcanin    @whalekeeper      @jonas     @power )
Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
🤣
But it did! Really!
See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”
It…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.
And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
❤️❤️❤️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol
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