Ruth

@whalekeeper

Yes, it sure is a good one!

@hybridlore

Oh, is that something glitchy on my end or on yours?

Equilibrium is a movie. It’s rated R for one scene at the end that we skip, and it has language but we filter it out with ClearPlay.

It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t…[Read more]

@grcr

Wait really?!! You’re gonna cry!!??

*jumps around the room cheering*

*pauses and realizes that is not the right response to someone crying*

*offers tissue*

*goes back to celebrating*

Oooo, a comic would be pretty insanely cool!!! Oh wow. What would you think of doing a few of the characters in comic form? You don’t have top if you…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@ellette-giselle

It’s so sad… I love 314 so much.

Also. random thought. this would make such a great manga/comic.

(Agh.. no, I’m not about to cry. totally not. not at all.)

@hybridlore

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.

@hybridlore

Okay thanks.

I noticed you don’t comment. Can you not do that for some reason because of a setting I have, or do you rather tag me here?

Yes, I like Don too. 🙃

Hmm. I’ve seen the movie, but I never was able to get my hands on the book. I actually took a lot of inspiration from Equilibrium, and even some from Hunger Games,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

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CHAPTER 4 and 5!!!!

@hybridlore

Yay! Wonder what glitched before…. 🤔

Oh really? Whoops! Did you mark the spot, or do I need to go find it?

Glad the tension is building!! Have a favorite character yet?

Hehe unintentional pun

I have a mystery story idea but absolutely no clue how to write a mystery:(

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@hybridlore

That is very odd. Did you let it load and scroll down? I just tried clicking on the link as a guest and it worked fine for me…..

Try again. I reloaded the page on my end,

@godlyfantasy12

Godlyyyy

You’re here, madam ghost. I see you on the Currently Active bar.

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@liberty

Gotcha.

@hybridlore

Okay, great! I’m glad you felt that difference.

Yes…Jace is the youngest. Everyone else is in their twenties or thirties…Jace is the only one with the word “teen” in his age. Everyone views him like their little brother.

Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol…

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@keilah-h

Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.

@whalekeeper

Life be like that sometimes.

lol