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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Other than that, this is a good section, and connects well with your previous ones.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heaven will be. These guys are scared and they need a reminder that they don’t need to worry and God will protect them, even if they die. They need to know that it will be worth it, and this can help them see tha…
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh wow I’m glad so many people are interested! Would you guys like me to write something for some of my characters first to get things moving?
Also, side note, the little imp guy is not a character anyone can write for. He will just be my character and he will act as a sort of guide to the others.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.
What does your signature mean, by the way?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.
Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.
The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@keilah-h ^^
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator
New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.
“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
I have seen some stuff. It looks like it has a cool concept to it
I’ve thought about watching it just to know what the hype is about.
and from there I gathered that kitsune are fox creatures from Japanese mythology, hence why kitsune masks always have ears.
I found that out from Godly because she said one of her characters was inspired by…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I’d love to be tagged!!
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
(Barnes always peaks my interest, but now more than ever, which is saying something.)
Aw, if she was aware of this conversation on a break-the-fourth-wall level, she would be mildly flattered.
Gabriel will most certainly pry into that one…
😐 Oh no, flight instinct initiated.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*Makes note to officially submit character for this rp after sprinting for CEW*
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@rae
Yeah it would be interesting. They definitely have different lore, though. Barnes has… maybe four different reasons for wearing her mask? Five? Oh goodness, I’ve never thought about that before but it’s true. And only one reason is remotely similar to Gabriel’s reason. -
Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Boom, I knew you were inspired by anime! I know very little about Kitsune or anime besides the classic Ghibli. XD And I can’t remember where I got the mask idea myself; it was probably just a product of deciding what my character would wear. Do you watch Demon Slayer?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 4 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 4 months ago
Got it, good to know. I didn’t remember what color he was before anyway, so this helps.
Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross
NO comment. 🤣
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HighScribe replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Yay! Ok hm, I’ll have to decide on a character to add 😆 and I have a pretty busy day today so I might not be able to until tomorrow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I LOVE HIM!!!! He’s sooo cute!
ikr??
Poor guy. He’ll find that out the hard way someday. XD
lol we bought the slinky at the same time as Squooshy, so I just randomly came up with that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 4 months ago
He now has a more Night Fury-like tail, which does still have the sharp venom spike on the end. He also has black on his wings, as well as a black “sock” kinda pattern, if you know what I mean, on his talons and ringing his wrists.
Still mostly yellow and brown though.
I believe I also told you earlier I reduced his age from my original…[Read more]
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