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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
What is up with KP? I haven’t gotten any notifs.
No. You’re fine to keep it in. Instead of feeling like it something I needed to get over for the next part, this felt more like setting the stage for the climax.
Okay, that makes sense.
Do you ever get your dad to look over these sermon/speeches?
My dad actually hasn’t r…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle ohhh, I understand now.
(I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣)
Just cause you’re a woman doesn’t mean you can’t write impactful things.
Like yeah, the Bible specifically says that only men should be pastors cause it mirrors them being fathers and heads of hou…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper lollllll yes
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
@theducktator oh that’s interesting, my dad is going on a plane trip tomorrow too! Not that early though.
I’ll be praying for both of them.
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago
@theshadow Hey! How are you doing? I haven’t talked to you in a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@the_potato-reporter add as many characters as you can keep track of. There’s not really a limit, just don’t go too overboard.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore
Okay, here’s a question for y’all.
So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.
mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.
Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.
Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,
“The great march of…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
My dad is flying tomorrow morning, (at like 4 something) and then home on Saturday. There have been quite a few airplane accidents recently, so prayers for his safety please!
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Leander was about to reach the top, when a strange looking vine started crawling towards him. Leander moved away from it, but there was another one coming from the other side. Leander was surrounded by the snake like vines.
Hey, you read my mind! I was going to say that the hedges did something like this when anyone tried to…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*Notices were already on page 3* Okay, I’ll touch on this soon. I’m drawing right now. XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I forgot tagsss
@rae @the_lost-journal @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator ^^^
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Omniscient
The tiny man standing before the group of strangers held his showman-like pose and waited expectantly. There was a long silence. Someone coughed.
“Oof. Tough crowd.” The man said defeatedly.
“Who are you?” Someone from the small crowd finally spoke up. It was a tall, white haired girl.
“And where are we?” A curly haired boy who was…[Read more]
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@hybridlore Thanks for reaching out. I’m doing pretty good, although these last two weeks of school are driving me crazy lol. How are you?
I’m glad! Yeah, you’re so close!
When do you get off? In two weeks? Interesting, because I think the kids around here get off this week.
I’m doing pretty good too! We just moved a few states over and so we’re still settling in but I’ve been doing pretty good overall. 😊
@hybridlore Man, those kids are lucky lol. My school technically gets off the 6th, when exams finish.
Oh wow, how was the move? That sounds like a lot, I’ll be praying for you and your family.
Oh, gotcha. It was pretty good—we’re still settling in like I said, but it’s been a few weeks and our new neighborhood is pretty nice. It’s a lot busier than we’re used to though.
Thank you!
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.