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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 21 minutes ago
@rae Hehehe Alpha has more knives than social skills
Dante
“Oi…” Dante growled. He straightened his posture and crossed his arms. “I might be smaller than you, but I’m tougher than I look. Survived this long. And I don’t have some stupid needle phobia.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 hours, 36 minutes ago
Leo
Level 0. This place had a funny floor plan. He punched the button and leaned back against the wall as the elevator began its decent.
Rory was giving him a weird, confused look. What had he said? Done? Leo lifted an eyebrow. “Yes? What is it?”
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 42 minutes ago
Within the next hour, everyone rushed around the house, trying to get ready for church and still be able to leave on time. This included a couple pairs of shoes being thrown down the stairs, someone looking for their shoes, people telling whoever was getting ready in the bathroom to hurry up, and a sister frantically searching her…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 hours, 3 minutes ago
Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any ideas for s…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 hours, 25 minutes ago
Rory
“Bolts and screws, bolts and screws.” Rory muttered slowly. For the amount of things they taught in Academy, there was very little about normal life. Mostly about killing and the most effective ways to do it. Rory racked his brain. The two words were familiar, but he couldn’t remember having encountered the things they repre…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 hours, 34 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 hours, 25 minutes ago
I would say it was fulfilled rather than changed. The Bible says not a dot not an iota will go away and nothing will change. (Murdering the wording, but that’s the raw meaning)
Otherwise yeah! Looking forward to the next part.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 7 minutes ago
Oops. Poor Eddie. At least this kid does actually like to dance.
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 7 hours, 7 minutes ago
Yeah! I am glad it is non-cannon… and I am no longer surprised when two of the same gender are shipped… (😮💨) but there is one thing worse that these people do that is WAYYYYYYYY worse than shipping siblings, or family… I can’t even say it!
Wanna know why? BECAUSE IT IS LITERALLY AND ILLEGAL SHIP!!!!!!!!! I hate fandoms…. I…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 7 hours, 24 minutes ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 7 hours, 27 minutes ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 28 minutes ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 31 minutes ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 50 minutes ago
@theducktator Yay! Im glad you’re feeling better. A lot of my friends and family have been sick lately as well. I’ve been pretty lucky that I haven’t gotten anything yet. Tis the season, I guess.
Liko
“Cookies?” Liko raised his eyebrows. “Who doesn’t?”
He paused, trying to remember what he was forgetting. His thoughts had drifted off to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 54 minutes ago
Sprite kid don’t get it. XD
Sypher
He followed the lasses in, settling into the seat be across from them.
“Eddie. Ellie. Ah.” He blinked at her in concentration. Grinned. “I am named Sypher, but everyone who doesn’t call me that, calls me Syph. As for dancing, or rather…I don’t believe I understand. What days are open”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 18 minutes ago
👍
Reading my older RPs kind of pains me. My sister came to my desk and found me clutching my head. XD
Whaat?? I’ve been having so much fun rereading your old stuff. It makes me so cheerful. 🩵 I was keeping myself motivated earlier by looking forward to when Marcel was introduced.
I may be in the same boat as you though when I get to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 25 minutes ago
Leo
He grinned. “First off you’re going to sit on that couch in the basement break room and sort a bucket of bolts and screws that I accidentally dumped together last week. Or maybe that was two weeks ago.” He paused to blink up at the ceiling for a moment, then refocused on Rory. “Anyway, you’ll do that while I check the work…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 hours, 15 minutes ago
this was another good section. I feel like you’re really sinking into a good style and voice with this. I had a slight problem with one sentence though.
When Immanuel came, the laws God previously had placed changed.
I don’t see that in the Bible. If anything, the laws were reinforced more strongly. (You have heard it said do not commit adu…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 hours, 34 minutes ago
Thankfully it’s not canon for obvious reasons.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 hours, 35 minutes ago
Who is James? (I think I want him to be someone who is laid back and jokes around a lot, but occasionally has a moment where he shows surprising wisdom.
oh. That’s not at all how I pictured him.
idk if this is a good idea, but I pictured him as quieter and much more thoughtful. Someone who is constantly watching and l…[Read more]
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