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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Chapter 5
The room was bright.It smelled sweet and had a strong sense of peace. Men of white stood about.
The room had rows of chairs and a small stage-like structure at the front of the room. On the stage-like structure was a Man of White. His almost gold blond hair gleamed in the light that radiated from every Man In White and his own.
He…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Chapter 4
Reverie bit back tears as she unsteadily lifted the vessel. The water inside jostled against the side as she lifted it from the well. She staggered back to her house. She wasn’t sure what was colder. The morning chill or the dipping temperatures at night.Deception and Fear trailed behind her, Deception placed a rock in her path. She s…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Chapter 3
Fear and Deception followed Reveire ,true to their name, like a shadow. She crossed the muddy road and forced her way through the thorny plants that lined the road. They clung to her skin and pricked her, her hair got caught many times but she yanked it free while jerking her skirt as she walked. At last she broke through and found…[Read more] -
WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Chapter 2
Prince Darkness was a beautiful creature. He was adorned with precious jewels that glittered in the blue light that emitted from him. He sat atop his throne. It was carved wood with gold and silver embedded into it. The wood had been burned to stain it black. It sat on top a raised portion of the room. A rug was rolled from the throne to…[Read more] -
WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Chapter 1
First Darkness came. Then came creatures.Nestled into the valley sat a village. Old and dreary.
There was no blue sky.
No birds chirping.
And all green was gone as if something had removed it all.
The village of Nis was covered in a dark mist. The darkness that had come long ago. Creatures ran free. Deceiving and harming the faint…[Read more]
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WritingWren started the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
(I’d like to put a disclaimer, that I wrote this awhile ago. My style has changed, my writer voice has improved as well as lots of other things. This project is still in the works, but has been shelfed for the time being while I work on a thriller. So, if you want to critque that’s fine, but I’m not focussing on it rn :D)
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 6 days ago
lol. My first book was only like 25k
Idk if I’ll delete mine. It’ll just haunt me from the google docs of unfinished and half finished projects XD
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks ago
Thanks! Lol, I guess I have a little. Hmm, my favorite part of writing is probably… drafting. NOT DRAFT 2 OR 3!!! They are painfullllll.
My least favorite is editing, and draft 2-3.
I work with succulents, and vegtables. So many.. I can’t name them all XD
Hmmm, my favorite name? Jared maybe?
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks ago
HELLO STELLA 😀 TYSM
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks ago
Yeah!
Okay, so the first one I wrote was a spy mystery/triller it was my first novel, and therfore my trash novel XD Idk what it was about tbh… it was crazy.. I pansted it fully lol My second is a Biblical Allagory, like Pilgrims Progress meets Hinds Feet in High Places. Its about the village outcast who learns of a kingdom…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks ago
Thanks so much!!
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I am wondering, where would I post my projects? Like the full thing? Is that how it’s done on here?
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh thanks you! And nice to meet you!
She bought me OYAN!(One Year Adventure Novel)
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Thanks!!
If you could ride a dragon for a day, or own a horse for a lifetime, which would you choose?
No brainer! Horse ofc!
Do Jellybeans count as food?
No 😛
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh yes! Thank you! Hmm. Favorite books : A Voice in the Wind by Francine Rivers, Farenheight 451 by Ray Bradbury and Animal Farm by George Orwell!
I would spend a week with my charrie Reverie!
I’d want a weapon that shoots ice 😛
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WritingWren started the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Hello everyone!! My name is WritingWren, but you can call me Wren!
I have been writing my whole life, but started to take it more seriously when my mom purchased me a writing curriculum two years ago.
I have written two books already, one I wrote in a year and it will never see the light of day XD The other, my passion project, is on the shelf…[Read more]
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