Queen_of_Alvastia

@queen_of_alvastia

W O W

No joke, that sounded like it was out of a book (and a very good book, at that)

I love your writing style! I am astounded by both your ability to write dialogue and your ability to include that many spaces in a single post. Bravo!!! 🥳🎉👏

@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76

Corvina

“Corvina, don’t leave us behind!”

Corvina gritted her teeth. Why was everyone here so committed to talking to her?

She huffed, ignoring him.

She stopped, however, at the sight of two men up ahead. Two…fairly muscular men. Strong jawlines, muscles that were highly pronounced by their outfits. Corvina…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

smh things we’ll never understand. XD

@queen_of_alvastia

Lol I thought my laptop was buggy

@queen_of_alvastia

OoOoooOooo As George Villiers famously wrote: “The plot thickens…”

mmmm, I see

Absolutely! Glad to help.

@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia OOF I’m getting major Corvina vibes from Viola as well!!! But I’m curious to see if they’re gonna clash or what cuz sometimes u never know…

Sometimes ppl with similar personalities clash and, especially being the same gender….this’ll be fun

@queen_of_alvastia

*Franticly searches* Where’d Storm go!?

That was great! I love the body language, the tones, the pros, the emotion, it’s so pretttyyyy :DD

Is this a scene from a bigger WIP? Cuz the only thing I wanna say is lacking a little bit, is the relative placement context(not a technical term XD).
Like, can they see the afore…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

As far as edits go, it was confusing which character you were speaking for as the POV switches around. Are you writing omniscient view?

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@queen_of_alvastia

Um, what just happened?! O.O

That was interesting, and it definitely had me hooked while reading it. I’ll have to think over any edits etc., but for now, that’s pretty good.

@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76

Corvina

Verity obviously wanted to converse.

Corvina sighed internally. She honestly wasn’t interested, but…the kid was upset, and Corvina had to grin at her spunk.

“Well…not much we can do about it now.” Corvina shrugged. Verity huffed and crossed her arms.

Corvina spotted a flash of something cross the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia

Corvina

She’d wanted to take up the back, but apparently that wasn’t going to bode well with a group of courageous men…

She rolled her eyes as she walked beside them, bristling everytime someone came close. She sighed.

While she’d been against bringing Sorren along, she couldn’t exactly stop anyone from doin…[Read more]

OH ALSO @freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia do I need to RP as Corvina again or….

idk if there’s much for her to say rn….

@queen_of_alvastia

You’re fine! =) It is an interesting tool though, but a hard one all the same.

@queen_of_alvastia

ONLY DO IT IF IT WILL HELP THE STORY! If the book’s good as is I wouldn’t add one just to deepen it.

It may cause trauma you don’t need.

*Weeps*

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia

Yup..there’s definitely hope….

*coughs awkwardly.*

I think I’ve put y’all thru enough emotional rollercoasters for a while……

😶

ANYWHOOOOOODLE

also, u can totally tell us about Alwin if ya want!

Plus, since we’ve discussed Charrie deaths, wanna talk about the why <…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Sigh…

If you guys really want to know, okay!

So, Ive known I was gonna do this for forever now, but things have gone back and forth. It’s always been this character though….

*hands tissues to Queenie (that’s ur nickname now)*

Its….Jocelyn.

*prepares for sadness*