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@seekjustice

Hey. Really wish I can join but I’ll be working now. Thankfully there’s nothing on my plate yet since I’m new and I might be able to pop in during lunch. So just letting you know that I’ll still be stalking around. 😛

@alia

Bye!

@rochellaine

I’ll be here a little while longer so just let me know if you’re still around 😛

@alia

I’ll keep that in mind though I don’t know whether I would ever need my character to faint. My MC might pretend to faint (which is likely given her job) but she’s not the kind to actually faint. 😛

@rochellaine @alia

Hey my MC will begin trekking out of her despair soon! Which means that I can write more cute and funny scenes soon! 😀

@alia @rochellaine

Hey I’ll be here now too for a little while.

@rochellaine

It’s ok I got what you mean 😛

By the way, no pressure here but I’m still waiting for you to post your comments 😉

I have to go now too so bye!

Bye @seekjustice I will be reading your blog! 😀

@rochellaine

Oh yeah. That part I was really struggling with because I already consider it beyond my usual humour. That scene was meant to poke fun at poetic language and at obnoxious heroines who think they are too ‘smart’ and ‘deep’ compared to other girls. I felt I was making it too obvious.

Carefully explained and diagrammed? I’m not that…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hmm I guess that makes sense. I’m calling it a parody because that’s the closest thing I can think of for now. I’m trying to strike a delicate balance between drama and comedy. In some ways being over the top is good but I’m also deconstructing some of the cliches and sometimes that calls for being more subdued and…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hey. Just getting lost reading SeekJustice’s blog and reviewing what I wrote last night… Do you think it is weird if every other character is described as handsome, beautiful, attractive etc.? I mean, my story is supposed to have a sugary romance novel surface (underneath the surface is something else entirely) after…[Read more]

@seekjustice @catwing

Sorry. Am getting distracted checking out the blog 😛

I have no discipline when it comes to POVs. I just finished a chapter with a scene from the POV of a minor character who I doubt will ever show up on page again. I am amazed how you managed to consistently stick with a few POVs each book, SeekJustice.

@introvert_girl

Yep this is the same job I was agonising over back then. God is great! 😀

@catwing

Thanks! 🤗

@seekjustice @catwing

Hey I’ll be here for a bit before I go off for bible study.

SeekJustice you have a blog? Can I read it? 😀

@jenwriter17  With the pencils, yes. 🙂

@seekjustice  @rochellaine  @valtmy  @jenwriter17  @sarah-anson  @anyone

Oy! I’m writing! Care to join me?

@jenwriter17  That’s AWESOME!!

Could you do me a favor and darken the picture, if you can? So the color pops more? Thank you!

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @alia @gh24682468999

Thanks guys 🙂 All the best for you too!

@seekjustice @rochellaine

Bye! I’m also leaving.

@rochellaine

I had to return to the doc to see who Nes is (me and my forgetfulness).

I suppose it’s really up to you to decide since I don’t know what you have planned for your plot. The whole proverbs thing is a potentially interesting quirk that can be a good source of wit and levity (not that your story is a comedy).

I’m fine if he’s just a…[Read more]

@seekjustice

If you’re the motherly type that wants to make sure no one gets hurt. why are you hurting your characters? 😛

@rochellaine

Great! I would love to continue reading your story then 🙂

Hmm… giving your MC two names might be interesting and justified if she is navigating two different cultures.

As for my own MC… no English names…[Read more]

@rochellaine @seekjustice

I am not sure if I am remembering this correctly but from what I learnt in my bible study, whether the names are Jewish or Greek can indicate the person’s background and origin. So I guess you should look at what type of name your MC’s family, given who they are as people, would give her.