PrincesaChronicle22

@koshka

Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**

I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!

@ellette-giselle

That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll

That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]

Also, this isn’t going to be a novel. More like a collection of works that intertwine somehow.

I mainly just need accountability, but I would love your guys’ thoughts because I want this to be GOOD!!! It is going to a silent auction after all hahahaha

SO please tear it apart as well XD

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Putting another character in here

Lois

“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.

“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]

@theducktator

Liko 

“Mandatory?” Liko scratched his chin thoughtfully. “I doubt it. How can you have fun at a party you’re forced to go to? Though, I wouldn’t know for sure. I’m just the janitor.” He cringed inwardly, thinking about giant mess he’d have to help clean up in the ballroom later that night.

“Why? Scared to go?”

@rae Aww Chase 🙁  The twins would have visited him in the hospital, but they didn’t know that he was there and they didn’t have much time to wonder about him.

@stephie
Oh yes, I’ll be praying! <3

@theducktator
Yay!! Praise the Lord!!!

@stephie

Thats horrible. Praying

@theducktator

Yay, that’s wonderful!!! Praying for you and your brother

@hybridlore

It is a good word, isn’t it? Using too many synonyms can be a problem though too (probably my biggest XD).

@ellette-giselle

Great, thank you! Do you want me to post references for the clothes?

@keilah-h

obviously they’d have like separate rooms, but I think each couple has a cabin to their own. I imagine each person’s room has stuff they enjoy in it—for example, Sniper’s probably has a place he can store his rifle and knife, a large window to the outside (he seems like the kind of person to enjoy that), and some things he’d find fami…

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@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicles22

Trevor

Trevor hid a smile while watching Fairy and Silvanus. Next to him, Azalea tapped him on the shoulder and he glanced over. “What’s up?”

“It’s getting late, we should head back to the cabins.”

Trevor nodded, standing up with her. “Azalea and I are going to sleep now, go…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, yay you’re picking this up again!! Here’s my character if you could draw her please:

Name: Elina Miller

Age: 16

Gender: female

Clothing: jeans, basic blue sneakers, blue T-shirt, a light green jacket, and a baseball cap.

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): about today

Physical appearance: about 5’5…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Going to catch up soon, but I noticed you used the word “glanced” a few times in one chapter (can’t remember which). It was just a little repetitive, not at all big though.

@esther-c

The chapters are good so far, I like the cozy feel. I agree with @savannah_grace2009 that it’s moving a bit fast, but other than that everything’s good. Nice job!!

@hybridlore

March 8th sounds good, I think I’ll be free then.

@keilah-h

it still took me a while to get it right, but considering I was only doing a headshot (pun intended) it was done quickly since I didn’t have to worry about anything under his neck.

Ah, that makes sense.

@stephie

Just saw this now, is it ok if I answer or no? It’s okay if not.

@hybridlore

(Let us know if anything changes! 😉)

I will 🙂

I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help