PrincesaChronicle22

@elishavet-pidyon

Hi I know I should be working on my actual wip, but role playing is less scary

Lois

Lois blinked. It was the only expression visible on his typically deadpan face.

“I don’t remember,” he responded.  He paused, seemingly looking for the right words, before asking, “But did you ever get into fights with your imaginary friend?”

*disappears again*

*crawls out of my hidey hole*
*drops art*

@kydonandwillow

I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!

So relatable lol, and it goes by too quick.

I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.

Cool, I’ll check it out soon.

@kydonandwillow

Hello, I’m Shadow, nice to meet you, welcome back to KP! Congrats on finishing your first draft! How has high school been?
If you want, I’d be happy to look at your new draft.

@esther-c

You’re welcome, and now that I’ve finished this next section here’s a few things. This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve int…[Read more]

Oh my goodness @felicity I just saw you were online recently when I was checking my friends list lol! I think about you sometimes, hope you’re doing well :3

@jonas

Got it, thanks!

@hybridlore

Thank you, and thanks for letting me know!

@ellette-giselle

Some stuff happened, so I’ll probably be posting the first chapter later today.

@keilah-h

Lol, if he has them XD

@whalekeeper

Wow, I just watched a video of someone playing one and that is so cool.

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

How can anything go b…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@ellette-giselle

Of course! XD

Also, you hit 4,000 posts!!

@jonas

I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).

@keilah-h

also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

@ellette-giselle

Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.