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@ellette-giselle

Ah, ok that makes sense.

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s so cute! I wonder what kind of adventure the little fox is on. I love the scenery and the cute cartoony style! 💕

@whalekeeper

oh I really like that idea. Two of my favorite things combined plus a little conflict <33

I would have to turn Lucky into some kind of alien, though.

@otherworldlyhistorian

Thanks! That is really helpful.

I guess in that case, I think my two main characters are actually antagonists to each other, maybe. They have opposite character arcs/ fatal flaws and kinda end up meeting in the middle at the end.

My other WIPs also need villains so I’ll probably be referencing this again.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, good luck. Are you judging them by the end of today or tomorrow?

@keilah-h

That was beautiful, and making me wanna write a song despite the fact that I have no songwriting ability.

Thank you, and you should go for it. I wouldn’t consider myself a great songwriter either, but it’s a lot of fun writing one.

also I found that aforementioned conversation, but i’ll post it in the fanfic forum instead of this…

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@liberty

Thanks! Yeah, Ecclesiastes was definitely in mind when I wrote this. Your story was really good too!!

@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Eldred

Silvanis and Fairy played an enchanting, other worldly song upon their instrument. Their voices raised into the night sky, mystical and beautiful. Eldred listened, closing his eyes. Once it was finished, he opened them. “That was amazing! Now excuse me; I must find a p…[Read more]

@loopylin

I would say that Villains in a loose sense are always necessary to a story since usually the conflict between whatever is your antagonist (Villain) and your protagonist (hero) will be driving the plot.

That said, antagonist (villain) is quite a loose term since it could be anything from a inanimate storm the protagonist must survive…[Read more]

@keilah-h

there’s also a convo between Medic and Demo about how every time Medic tries to give him a new eye, something bad always happens to it and them as a result, and Medic’s come to the conclusion that Demo’s eye socket is just cursed or something.

Eh, that sounds right XD

@ellette-giselle

Here’s my story, sorry if it isn’t great, I kind of rushed it lol.

The Final Minutes of a Dying Man

Eyes closed, he began to think.
And now, to death I go. The pain had subsided now, he couldn’t feel it much.
And as for life, what I have i to say? I laughed, cried, feared, failed, conquered, and loved. I saw many things, such…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yw!

It looks a little ‘messy’ in the way most signatures do, but it’s not ‘sloppy’ and it’s nice and even.

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow, that looks really nice! I love the wreath of branches.

(your signature [on the drawing, not your forum signature] looks very pretty and neat, btw. I wish I could do mine that nice :p)

@liberty

I’m going to wait a few more days before starting, which will give time to those people who haven’t introduced their characters yet. And, you know, Thanksgiving is just around the corner! So, after Thanksgiving, I will give the settings, etc…

Sounds good!

@keilah-h

I believe the canon reason Demo lost his eye was cause he was reading the wrong kind of book and got blasted in the face with a magic laser beam. LOL.

XD that would be very in character.

Where did Valve Software come up with this stuff anyway??? XD XD

Good question, maybe they just sit around and make jokes about the games at…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I? :]

Already asked this in the chat chat, but then realized there’s already a topic for it.

Anyway, I could use some help.

How do y’all create villains? Are they necessary for a story? How do you tell a story without them?

Im kinda stuck rn because I don’t know how to create villains, but my story doesn’t really have enough conflict without one. I’…[Read more]

@keilah-h

XD that’s probably why then. That’s not very surprising it would be those two who would end up finding those people.

@whalekeeper

Do you guys want to try joining up with another small group?

Sure.

Honestly she would be a pretty grumpy grandma. The grandma who complains about kids but gives them cookies all the same.

XD

@rae

Rowen

A teen? What is that? Rowen didn’t bother to ask at this point, it was probably another thing from Reid’s world he wouldn’t…[Read more]