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@savannah_grace2009

I’m currently on chapter 9, and so far I think the pacing is good. I’ll get some more thoughts to you later.

Also, question. Are you planning on making Livia a main character in this draft?

Also I should warn you guys…

My book is a *little* dark. There’s mentions of abuse, slavery, and cruelty, as well as evil and violence.

It’s not graphic. I had my mom read  it and she said I wrote it “tactfully”, because it got the point across without being too graphic or descriptive.

But just thought I’d say that if you guys are really…[Read more]

@liberty and @everyone

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I’m not sure….

I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.

In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.

So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much girl <3 that means a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

And don’t worry about it!!!!! If you can, yeah, just let me know!

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

@ellette-giselle

Wolfy dies, doesn’t he…??? 🫣 Or does he not?? I must knowwwww 😩

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@koshka

Ah, okay, I get what you’re saying. I’m definitely going to be considering that getting into some major plot points coming up in my book. 😉 Thanks!

@theducktator (excuse my tardy reply🫣🤭)

Aww, that’s a bummer. 🙁 Yeah, the time off can be nice though. 😉 Still praying for y’all!! <33

@ellette-giselle

Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! I really appreciate your point of view on this. I can’t say I agree with everything 100%, but I definitely understand and support your viewpoint. It gave me a lot to think about!

In fact, piggybacking off of your conversation with Whaley, I can totally understand your way of t…[Read more]

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@theducktator

NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.

TELL ME ABOUT IT. It’s insane how often you’ll find those in books and it’s really just ridiculous. 🥱…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”