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@keilah-h

He’s not truly a “good guy” and does some horrible things, but he’s also not totally evil either, and has depth that makes me think what he might’ve become if things had gone differently for him.

Yes, I like that point. I think that is the main difference between, “tragic backstory” verses “pure evil”

Are they evil because of what has…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, Azula is my all time favorite villain. Ozai though… he is a good example of the “pure evil” and I do like those villain types. But he also doesn’t do much, and we know what he wanted but did we really know why he wanted it?

But dear Azula, it was part of her very personality. She manipulated people, she was amazing at it,…[Read more]

😭😅 I wrote a whole villain rant, but KP ate it. And it was like five paragraphs, so I am not writing that again

@jonas

Yeah, villain motivations can definitely be hard. With heroes it’s kind of a “duh” they want to stop said villain and keep people safe. MCs are totally subjective but generally that is how we see our heroes.

Sooo, I might just rant about villains for a while? Read at your own risk, or don’t, either works 😂

But that leaves the qu…[Read more]

@jonas

two are not very fleshed out, and the last is only moderately well developed. I have others that are vague formulations in my mind, and some stories where I haven’t even begun to conceptualize the villain.

Yep, definitely feel that. Which makes figuring out plot and the main character difficult as well. I feel like it’s one of the e…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Maybe there’s some form of serfdom? Like the very rich who can afford the Vital subjugate the poor populations by creating superstructures out of it and forcing those who seek it’s shelter to work for them, threatened by being tossed to the elements if they disobey?

*Stokes chin thoughtfully*

Hmmm, yes, yes. That does make sen…[Read more]

@jonas

Mkay!

(I also haven’t even decided on mine yet.)

Yeah, I’m really not the best at villains, most of them don’t exist yet, and the rest need soooo much development. Vere is only put together as much as he is, because he’s also a main character.

But I’ve had trouble putting them in RPs for whatever reason. But hopefully I’ll get around to f…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Yes, yes, yes!! Those are all wonderful questions that I definitely need to be thinking about! Thanks so much!!

I think it would be interesting if he was fighting as a Gladiator not because he wants to, but because it was his only option in some way — maybe his social class was too low for any other high-paying job? I also think i…

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@power

I had a response, but KP ate it 😂

(And you might notice that I stayed out of Song of Solomon for some reason. . .  🤫😁 Now let’s hope you don’t come back with the tons upon tons of pro-marriage verses. 😜)

😂😊That’s okay. I’m not one to argue over scriptures, everyone has their own opinions, and that’s okay! I do believe wholeheartedly that…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Mkay, sounds good

@keilah-h

Okay! Serin has met Allen before, so would she recognize him? Or not since he’s kinda restarting?

@esther-c

Ah, I love them bothhh 😂😍

And I love Froy as Ev’s refrence

@esther-c

No problem!

And I was wondering what your charries look like? You don’t have to give me a description rn but eventually that would help 😂

@rae @keilah-h @beth-torres @jonas

Kay, just gonna have something random happen with the siege or something.

NAZYRA

She backed away from the stream, shuddering. Nazyra looked back at the rest of her companions, opening her mouth to say something when a piercing sound erupted in the distance. What was that? Had it been outside the city, or…[Read more]

@everyone

Okay, idea. What if the villains are already in the castle, and meet the groups that way to start working with them?

And for everyone who wanted to add a villain but was worried about their characters recognizing them. What if whoever ‘summons’ the villains simply gives them a disguise or magically cloaks their identity?

@power

*Convulses into spasms then collapsed to the ground* 😫😫😫

NOOOOOOO!!!! HAVE MERCY ON YOUR POOR READERS!!!! 😭😭😭

IT’S SO DRAMATIC!!! 😤😤😤

Oh, I am so sorry 😂. May I ask, is it that specific romance suggestion, or the very idea of the word itself?

@jonas

Yeah I agree! I could maybe do one this morning, but I’ll be pretty today and tomorrow

We’ll see!

@esther-c

I totally forgot to do descriptions!! 😅

Welp,

Serin

I have an old pic of Serin, but it won’t show.

Looks- she’s Pelgarkine, which means light blue skin, taller than the average human. And shiny aquamarine hair. She wears fitted and sleek metal armor that glints different colors of silver, green, and blue. She’s carrying a simple…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

XD Sammmeeee, I’m a total sucker

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loo…

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@anyone

Okay I had one idea that is kinda random but it’s there.

He could be this Gladiator who fights for entertainment, who looks all fierce in the ring, but then in reality is this perfect gentleman and all sweet and always apologizes to his opponents after he fights them. And he and the MC meet before one of his matches and then she’s like”…[Read more]