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Elfwing started the topic WIP First Chapter request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi! I’m wondering if anyone is interested in reading the first chapter of a fantasy novel I wrote…
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
HAHA apples are grown up cherries, that is awesome!!! oh man, I remember someone telling me I’d have sprouts grow out of my ears if I ate apples seeds, my sister avoided them like the plague and I ate all the ones I could get, just to be a rebel XD
yeah he’s not the most popular person, but he has some good stuff.
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Elfwing replied to the topic WIP First Chapter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
HAHA oh man, I feel sorry for them… (almost)
oh and a line I just came up with yesterday for a sarcastic book character, “oh, my heartbreak.” *pauses while they whine some more, sighs, “suck it up, you’re fine, I don’t see blood or broken bones.”
Homo sapiens XDD
my siblings would just ask me what it means until I tell them.…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
haha cool! when my siblings whine, I say something similar; “you gonna live?”
if it’s like, bump their to into a corner or step on lego, i’m like “Be it a mortalizing wound?”
them: …..*silence
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Elfwing replied to the topic What is your favorite hero and villain rivalry? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 6 months ago
I’d say Rodolpho and Marcello from River of Time series. (it’s a young adult series)
Rodolpho is on the enemy side, but likes the same girl as his old friend Marcello; he kidnaps her, falls in love with her, almost marries her, then minutes before they would have been in an arranged marriage that she didn’t want to be in, Marcello shows up so he…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
oh, ok, yeah, I wouldn’t know either lol
do you have any catch phrases?
“mwahahaha I is evil…” is when I’ve done something mysterious. When I’m trying to figure something out; “Give us a chance, precious! give us a chance! It must give us three guesses, precious! It must give us three!” *imitates Gollum’s voice and holds up two…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic WIP First Chapter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Sorry, that first link didn’t work
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M_m_aWLWPZ1ehSyMygNP556EzMbGl_HIh7m_DOaSwSc/edit?usp=sharing
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Elfwing started the topic WIP First Chapter in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Here is my first chapter in my WIP, Lin, I know you mentioned interest in it
By the way, it is in the middle of a series, in case some scenes don’t make as much sense.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B7iEy4W0rNF1JACKJqaXQXD83RVF3Y3pAmsau4r42BU/edit?usp=sharing
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
ok, good to know 🙂
oh nice! good names for fish, I like it! Bettas are so fun!!
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Elfwing replied to the topic Brother and sister friendship in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for the advice and input! You are right, siblings don’t seem to say that. I’ve only heard one person say that to their sister, ever. In fact, I’ve only heard guys say “Bro!” to friends, and I sometimes will say something and end it with “-sister!” but never to my sister. Funny how that works XD
Thanks! Glad you liked…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Sorry I think I sent a reply to you? it disappeared and I can’t find it…
in case it didn’t send, what kind of fish do you have?
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
haha, yes, I am a Tolkienite to be sure, cool name for it, sounds better than Tolkien nerd XD
Thanks! I love griffins… they just look so cool!!! The thing I like about fantasy is that I can make my own twists on creatures without people telling me I’m incorrect XD I mean, if I am wrong I like to know, but… yeah, with writing its…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi Evelyn! do you mean you know me because of the character discussion or that we’ve met before in person?
Cool to meet you and yes history is amazing!
My characters rebel against me, but they’re pretty well-behaved in the book to be honest, ahem *whispers; for the most part Sh!! don’t tell that they snuck off on a year-long…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Brother and sister friendship in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
haha oh man, siblings are God’s way of testing our patience… I ought to know I have five younger ones XD
I suppose it would be accurate when I tell people; “I love my siblings… but I do not always like them.”
Thanks for the input it was very helpful!
🙂
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Elfwing replied to the topic Brother and sister friendship in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! no that’s very helpful and I’m glad you said it, I like having several views on things!
I have heard that some brothers and sisters are friends and enemies at the same time, it’s always slightly puzzled and amused me.
the sitting next to sibling but not hugging thing makes sense, being close to another person you love and…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic New adventurer here! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
@devestate-lasting
thanks! I am shy about sharing my work… but I am trying to be more confident about my story, seeing as the friends reading it have been pestering me for the last year and a half to publish it.
here is my readers’ favorite part from book one (I assume this is fine to post?);
(they have escaped into a tunnel at this point, it…
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Elfwing replied to the topic Brother and sister friendship in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay! thanks for the tips… they’re super helpful, and they line up with what I have heard from my friends for sure. I just come from a very awesome family who loves hugs and there’s nobody who doesn’t hug, even with the guy cousins.
The sarcasm and comeback rule is so true, even with guys who are acquaintances, and oh man it’s…[Read more]
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Elfwing started the topic Brother and sister friendship in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi I need help with my novel in making a realistic brother and sister relationship they’re teenagers, and really good buddies.
I don’t have a brother my age, so I don’t quite know how to write that kind of friendship - Load More