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@calidris sounds good! what i mean by plotting is that i need help with whether scenes are too vague and if im getting what i mean to write across

but yeah when you have the time, knock yourself out lol

@calidris sounds good and thanks for the answer.

sounds good, i dont have a timeline for the beta reading. this is for my novel, which is about 110 pages

here is the email, roseoakauthor at gmail dot com

@calidris haha no it wasn’t the question really, but I will accept it if you want to. I was just wondering if I’m the only person who fills in the holes/problems in books to such an extent I don’t see the problems XD

@joy-caroline @calidris @will_starke

@madelyn sorry if you get like five emails of my response, the forum ate it again

@kathleenramm The toughest criticism of anything I had, would be my mom on a story I wrote. it was very ridiculous, even for a 12-year-old’s writing and she told me as much and that I could definitely improve it. She said it lovingly, but at that point, it didn’t matter how she said it, it stung my childish pride. XD It was for my schoolwork and…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

I tried to downloading google forms but they asked me to access personal info and control what I put on google forms!😬 I don’t feel comfortable allowing that!

I’ll see if I can find another way!

@devastate-lasting

I understand completely!

I’m actually not sure how to do that!

Is there another way?

@keilah-h

Oh I totally understand!! That’s ok!:) I don’t think these another way! A least not that I know of!🤷‍♀️

@lydia-s
No worries! Thanks! But if you still want to read it after Friday I’m fine with that too:)
 

I forgot to mention that my book is a Christian fiction novel, about finding God and her true family! Like a conversion/coming of age book!;)

@nanisnook

By email would be great!! Thanks!

@joy-caroline ok cool! Yeah I can see that loyalty considering her personality

@abigail-m

Ok😄 So we’re in the same boat!

That’s sounds great! I will definitely try that out! Thank you so much!

Good luck with your blogging venture too!!!

@abigail-m never mind it didn’t eat it lol my phone is just being ornery again. Ugh 😆

@abigail-m I think the forum ate your response lol thanks so much for the feedback! Those three things you pointed out are actually my favorite parts! Thanks for the response! 🙂 I’m glad the funniness shows through

@Abigail-m thank you! I’m glad it made you laugh! Yes  it’s from personal experience and I totally do not recommend it because it’s also a barrel of laughs when they get into the pressurized whipped cream cannisters. Make sure theye wearing a black shirt for the ultimate effect of hilarity

Thank you so much!!! You probably understand, but be…[Read more]

@madelyn that is so wonderful you want to pursue a medical career,  go for it girl! 🙂