Power

@hybridlore

So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?

@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

You win.

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

@theducktator

How did you not know that?

lol.

It was pretty obvious. lol.

@whalekeeper

 

Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?

Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..

(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)

@raxforge @theducktator

Yay! An excuse to talk about Andrew!!!!!!!

1. He’s really really really adorable, and I will not hear otherwise!
2. He has the best smile EVER, EVER
3. He likes nicknames apparently (really adorable)
4. He’s the most gentlemanly guy you’ll ever meet
5. He thinks his jokes are stupid when they’re actually hilarious (I just…

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@loopylin

I don’t write animal characters. I can’t get into it like people. lol.

Thanks for the invite!

@whalekeeper

Hey, sorry it took a minute.

How detailed does that usually get?

Oh it depends. Sometimes I only have 4 or so points, and sometimes it’s close to 16. It just all depends on what points I know I need/want to hit.

What do you mean by graphing characters?

I have a sheet with the character’s name at the top. Then I add age,…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @koshka

Don’t rub it in.

@whalekeeper

I do bullet points and make sure I know the key points, the beginning, climax, and end. Then I graph out my characters. Other then that, I don’t do too much planning as long as I have a solid plot idea in my head.

@liberty

My older sister used to raise rabbits!

we raise silver fox rabbits!

I had an allergy to beef for a while, so we started raising rabbits for meat. Though, now they’re basically pets.

Also, I am working on a short story for the prompt, it’s just gotten a little delayed (I decided to totally scrap my first idea in favor of another one Thursday. It’s been interesting)

@ellette-giselle

WHAT???!!!

*Undignified squealing commences*

Oh, she is kinda scary. I think she’s done a good thing though. She deserves the medal.

@hybridlore   @koshka

having hybridlore on the protection squad is scary! Why did I ever tell her about it?

@hybridlore   @koshka

okay!! Fine!! I give in.

I’ll rewrite that whole scene tomorrow.

y’all win.

*slams down pencil in despair.*

it actually won’t hurt the plot much, and you are actually making sense.

fine. I’ll do it.

they go free. Both of them.

I can’t believe I’m doing this.

@hybridlore

*GASPETH*

*Throws confetti*

*Offers you a medal of honor for your bravery in the Character Protection Squad service*

@hybridlore

*Straightens sunglasses*

@ellette-giselle

I’d say don’t kill the boys. You could bring them close, scare the living daylights out of the others, but don’t kill them.

I expected them to get captured and killed. It felt like “here we go again”. So many characters by this time have been killed, that it was almost…boring? Change…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes you are you little…. little…… I don’t know what you are.

Dangerous person.

@whalekeeper

Lol. I’m having a great day. Having a lot of fun plotting my next book and building character boards and aesthetics.