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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*
Nooo, this is so sad.
😭
Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.
as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
yay!! I’m so glad.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!
I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.
Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.
Or does that not work.
I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 10 hours ago
So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?
Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 11 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!
NEXT SECTION!
Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 11 hours ago
Do whatever. I’m not sure really what to rp atm, since I don’t think Kepha has rped to my last rp.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
I’ll jump on board any time.
Though, I don’t think Andrew will be able to since he will be gone almost all summer.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 14 hours ago
Thanks. I might!
I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭
Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣
I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.
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Ruth posted an update 2 days, 1 hour ago
WE GOT SECOND PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Idk if you know or not, but Saturday (5/24) my crew and I raced a few boats on the Connecticut River. The boat I rowed in was a woman’s four, in the second heat of a race (meaning there were too many boats for the amount of lanes so they did two separate races but compared the times as if the…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 4 hours ago
Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.
is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 4 hours ago
I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 4 hours ago
dang that’s dark
yeah, well that’s reality for ya.
It seems like they suddenly have a lot more control over the Empire than they appear to.
Uh yeah. They’ve got a pretty strong hold now. Not only are they controlling the Empire’s ruler by fear of the gods, but they’ve got him personally motivated to avenge his cousin and set his kingd…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 5 hours ago
@hydbridlore
Awww <3333 I missed you too girl
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 5 hours ago
@keilah-h @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @esther-c
Help meeee
I’m stuck *cries* I want to write over the summer but I’m strugglingggg
You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?
Yeah that’s…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 5 hours ago
Thank you so much <3
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CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!
Congrats, that must have been super exciting!!