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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 18 hours ago
GIRL!!! You’re gonna make me cry! ‘
Rory
Rory hung on to Leo, pressing his face against the older boy’s shoulder. For a time he wept, and the relief was frighteningly sweet. At last he forced out in a choked voice, “Leo, I… I want to go back to the church.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Leo
He took Rory’s hands in his own, forcing him to stop cutting his palms.
“Rory, you’ve been carrying a lot of things on your shoulders. What you’re telling me–that was wrong. Horribly wrong. But it’s not your fault.”
He pulled the kid into a hug like he was five year old Quincy. Rory was shaking.
Leo sighed, and began to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Rory
Rory swung his foot against the floor and sniffed hard. “Two years ago. I… I was fourteen.” He rubbed his scared arm again. “I couldn’t go near planes again. I knew they would kill me, but I’d rather die then go up there again. I thought they would find out… but then i was transferred to another base. I don’t know why.” He…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Poor kids indeed.
Leo
He sucked in a breath through clenched teeth, and slowly let it out. He was not cut out to be a counselor, alright.
But he was a brother. Leo pulled a handkerchief from his pocket.
“You haven’t let yourself grieve, have you? When did this happen?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Poor Rory. I actually feel bad.
Rory
Rory hoked back another sob and sucked in a shuddering breath. “My navigator was injured. The fire got him across the right side of his face, neck, and shoulder. He…. he broke down and started crying, and I held him. He was just a kid, Leo. We all were! It was the first time I had ever seen one…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Maniacal laugh.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Bwahaha. YES.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 19 hours ago
Leo
Fury, red hot and searing, boiled up in his throat. Leo closed his eyes, trying to choke it down.
Inexperienced, trainies, used as test pilots. No escape plan. Destress calls ignored. Fire,screams, acrid smoke. And the lost. His fists clenched.
Stay calm. Keep control for the kid. He doesn’t need your anger.
He exhaled…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
Yes, Green Ember.
I know. Which is why I was thinking on a strictly Personality and Arc basis.
I can’t decide, though. And I really want to draw this. XD
I would almost say Jo, but he’s too much like Pippin…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
Ha. Leo would ask.
Rory
Rory stepped into the break room. “I… I don;t know. Just an engine. An engine that didn’t work…”
He sat down on the couch and stared at his hands. “There were four of us, Leo. It was a new plane they had built. It was like a fighter jet, but a little bigger, and there were two gunners, a pilot, and a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
VERY IMPORTANT QUESTION:
Fort those who have read GE and LotR.
Is characters were swapped, who would be Gimli???
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
I understand. I haven’t gotten notified for… a month? Two months? If I miss something, that’s why.
Thank you! That means a lot. 😀
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 20 hours ago
Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 20 hours ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
Leo
He blinked in the dim lighting. No good memories, huh. And no childhood either. He’d just have to what he could do about that.
But the kid had been training as a pilot. Had crashed, like Jake. The terror still clung to him too. Leo swallowed and put an arm around the kid’s shoulders.
He let the quiet of the basement deep…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
Because Alistair is an amazing name. Not fit for a duck-thing.
😂
*screech of annoyance*
KP IS NOT NOTIFYING ME AT ALL ABOUT ANYTHING!!!!!
I loved this so much!! It was really, really good! I love your style!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 21 hours ago
It says access is denied. Is there any way you can let me on? My Microsoft email is
rosewood.debate658@passinbox.com
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 21 hours ago
AHH!!! NO!!!
I never saw this!!!!!
I was snooping on someone’s profile and tracked a comment down here and that’s how I found it!!! Ugh. KP! I’ll look at this as soon as I can. I try to respond to everything I get tagged for, so if I don’t respond it;’s because I didn’t get the tag.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 21 hours ago
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