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@linus-smallprint

Considering the circumstances, I don’t think the above will go through his mind. I think he’ll run there because that’s the only place he can go really, and he’s going to be having a really, really hard time. It’s going to be surprising if he thinks clearly enough to get back there without getting lost or injured. Then he gets…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Is it bad that it was reversed?

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment

Ugh.

I had that feeling as I was editing it.

Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..

So is it bad that Julian responded differently?

Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

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Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@liberty

I think so! Send it!

@liberty

Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂

Ah, I get it.

We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]

@liberty

Who?

I’ve killed a lot……

Also, what do you think of the song?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint       @liberty

Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint      @liberty

How about this one?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.

@whalekeeper

Probably for doing dirty work. *shrug* basically completing tasks that the main villain doesn’t want to (or can’t)

@hybridlore     @linus-smallprint

Hey, that kind of stuff even happens here in America.

I took a class out of the home with several home school kids. It was a Constitutional class, and at one point we were debating real court cases or arguing pro or con real things.

Well, I was put on a team with three of the guys, (that class was heavily out…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness! That’s adorable!!!

@whalekeeper

Don’t have them there just for the sake of stupidity. Don’t make it look like all you want its stupidness and so you’re throwing in characters with the roll of being stupid.

They have to have a point and a reason.

@rae

YAY!!!!!

Oh man!! That really got to me!!!

I am someone who loves large chunks of scripture in stories, but if it feels too long maybe break it up a little and have shorter passages with some “…” filling the sections that don’t directly pertain to the story.

YES! It felt very legit!

One of my favorite!!

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia.  lololol.

@liberty

But that IS how I feel!!!!

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @whalekeeper @theducktator

It feels like forever since I posted a story on here, but here is story #11! This is my favorite one of the entire Baron Chronicles, and it brought tears to my eyes. I hope you enjoy it too:)

 
Though your sins be as Scarlet…
Sunlight filtered through the pale…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For anyone who is interested…..

Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.

(and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)

@linus-smallprint

Hello, nice to see you around.

Girls are weird.

*indignant gasp* how dare you!

😂

For some reason I started to imagine Hassan as Middle Eastern when you mentioned his name. Probably wearing a turban of sorts.

Well that is exactly how you should picture him! Bravo! 👏🏻

(if you look back at the story moodboard you may catch a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

No idea who those fellas are you just mentioned, but go for it! As long as they aren’t stupid. They can be funny and even idiots, but they need to have a clear roll. A reason for why their leader hasn’t killed them off.

Have you seen The Defense of New Haven?

If not, you must watch it! It’s really good. It’s a Christian home…[Read more]