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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
- He’s a rolling stone/without roots/drifter.
- He’s curious about things.
- He likes to work with wood/whittle.
- He’s a messenger, or somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle.
- He’s either a strategist, or stuck in a tight situation.
- Despite his youth and friendly demeanor, he can fight like a cat.
- He’s more of the…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
“Even for kings he comes”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Is there any popular trope or writing style you don’t get the hype for? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Wordy writing styles.
As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.
I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today
1. What is your full name?
“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”
2. What is the most important thing the average person should…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Is there any popular trope or writing style you don’t get the hype for? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
This is a great topic! I’ll have to think about it though.
By the by, I don’t see duplicate posts. 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’ve been commenting on the proton one. I hope you’re getting those……
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon You’ve published some of your animal fantasy books, correct? I’m not very big into animal fantasy, but i have a friend who is. Her birthday is coming up, and I was wondering where I could purchase one or two of your books for her.
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Oh, sorry for the late response!
I haven’t published yet. I’m touched that you’d want to get them though. 🙂 When is her birthday? I could send/share printable short stories. (In fact, quite a few KeePers could do a compilation)
If you want to get her some great animal fantasy books though, I would 100% recommend The Mistantle Chronicles by…[Read more] -
Also! Kylie Beevers ( @livingwoodchronicles ) is a KeePer that’s published. She has a fun series about a kingdom of foxes. The first book is Rise of the Living Wood. I think the second one is coming out soon. It’s sold on Amazon, and maybe in some book stores? I liked it. 🙂
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Her birthday party is tomorrow (I’m late getting to this because I didn’t know until about a week ago) and I do have a gift for her that i got just in case I couldn’t get a book in time. Thank you for the suggestions, i might just get her a belated birthday present after the party. Thx again
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
I might just try this. I’ve been wanting to do a music challenge for a while.
I already know one of them! (cue groans from my siblings who have to bear with me crying every time I hear it now. XD)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
@the-lost-journal
Okay, but don’t you think it is a little… robotic…? to just say: “the Bible and C.S. Lewis told me so!” Or a little childish? Well, of course if the Bible tells you something you should probably listen to it (obviously) but don’t have your own opinion on the matter? Like WHY does the Bible and Lewis say that?
I would be careful…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Ah! Faithfulness. That’s the one I was trying to remember. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
1. What are your thoughts on Jesus having siblings? I believe that Mary and Joseph were blessed with kids (three sons and daughters, if I remember correctly.) They would technically be Jesus’s half-siblings.
2. If you could visit one of the holy sights from around the world, where would you go? And why? Holy sites? The Western…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
The last one, but I love endings.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I know. It’s so bad.
Rory
Rory watched in fascination while Leo worked. As the older boy began wrapping his knee, he spoke. “Any profession you ever wished to work in?”
Rory swallowed and blinked. “I… I don’t really know what that means.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh goodness, this kid is so awfully oblivious. It’s a handkerchief! XD
Leo
Rummaging through several junk drawers produced a thin foam pad, two unsharpened pencils, an old knit shirt, and one hopefully unused ace wrap from a questionablely dated first aid kit.
“Let’s see what we can do for that knee.”
He knelt in front of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I know. 😢
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