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@theduckator

oops

I totally disappeared again lol

sorry hahaha

Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

Making money is AWESOME lolll

@hybridlore

Thanks! I’m glad.

Okay, I’ll see what the others think. I liked it as a nice recap of everything that was happening.

Erich is one of the Stien children. He’s married and has a kid. They were the family that Julian, Roland, and Aelic were staying with when Rolf and Leon caught up with them.

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FIRST SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Dawn Will Come
Draft 4
 
My soul waits for the Lord
    more than watchmen for the dawn,
    more than watchmen for the dawn.
   …

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@elishavet-pidyon

Oooooo!!! I like your thoughts!!! Yes, I do have a weakness for armor. Go Lieutenant Roth and his guys! (though one does start to wonder what’s going to happen when those soldiers came in contact with orders to hunt down the believers……)

You’re planning a plot twist for the series as a whole.

Interesting…..

There are s…

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@koshka

YES!! I am 100% in agreement with that! Those are the kinds of scenes that I love.

@ellette-giselle

Well, thoughtesss…

It’s a dark before dawn thing. Maybe playing with the idea that the Empire has long, dark winters.

Fabulous armor. I love it. I’m happy done of the soldiers were saved so we can root for some of those suits of armor…. But there’s probably more bad guys in armor than otherwise.

The government is going to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oof, yeah no. I plum don’t like Victor Hugo’s writing, so I’m with you on that.

I don’t particularly enjoy heaven scenes either, but when an author takes a moment to show that God is actually with us down here, like when Aaron knew Jesus was so close and when the Maker talks to Janner at the Fane of Fire and felt the love of the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Then again, I have had a pretty good track record for the last two books. No MCs died! Yay!

@hybridlore

Ah, so you like the MCs. Both of them.

Poor you.

😂

@hybridlore

Oh! I forgot I told KP people about it. 😂

Zombie computer! I beg pardon. His name is Smaug and he’s a dragon.

😂

aha. I see.

well, you should be scared for them. Especially your favorites.

(who are your favorites again?)

@koshka

Ah, I see.

Okay yes, that makes sense. I tend not to write heaven scenes. (I always cringe for that scene in Les Misserables) I don’t know why, but I like to keep clear. Hmm, interesting with the Aaron comment. I’m interested what makes you think that.

I don’t mind Screwtape or Warden and the Wolf King, I like how both of those were…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Not sure where you go that from the board, but interesting guess…………

Oh, it was a prediction that came from the general feel of the board, and the last book.

Oh, well thanks for straightening that out! I had considered it. 😂

*Bows* You’re welcome. Glad I could be of service.

Interesting. I would say a majority of my charact…

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@hybridlore

Yes! How did you know about CR?

CR will be released this spring! Super excited about that.

Oh boy. It looks like we’re in for . . . something. I’m starting to be concerned for your characters.

what makes you say that!?

@koshka

Woah! Hi!

1)There will be mob fights.

Not sure where you go that from the board, but interesting guess…………

2)Nearly everyone we love will get hurt.

why would you ever think that?! 😢

🤣

3)Leon and Jullian’s pasts will come back to haunt them.

🤔

4)There will not be a plane crash, or a nuclear war.

Oh, well thanks for s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

1)There will be mob fights.

2)Nearly everyone we love will get hurt.

3)Leon and Jullian’s pasts will come back to haunt them.

4)There will not be a plane crash, or a nuclear war.

5)The journal will be continued.

6)Prepare for major fallout to begin from the Prince dying in the last book.

7)Someone is going to meet Jesus,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks. I’ll try to keep that in mind.

Oooh. Moodboard.

Lots of wolves it there. It looks like you reused several pictures from last time. But less this time as well.

Yes, I wanted it to still feel very connected to the last one.

Any ideas/thoughts/predictions?!

@theducktator

No, we don’t do infant baptism. We will baptize children who understand what baptism is ect. and want to be baptized (I was baptized at 6 years old for instance), but we don’t baptize infants. While a soul is the same size no matter the age, we believe baptism must be a choice just like the rest of salvation, a decision on the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Swimming in gravel?

Yes. Think how hard that would be.

What book is this?

Part 2 of a WWII trilogy.

@hybridlore

I know….. but I’m currently on a good flow with a different book I’m writing….. and I have been swimming in gravel on it up until now. Look, let me finish the chapter and then I’ll try to post something.

@hybridlore

But that’s not fair to the other innocent people reading your book. 😢