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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 months ago
Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!
Liberty’s Rangers story!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
XD Me too.
I like science well enough. I really liked Geology and Radiology. (Lots of elements causing drama together.) Hence my choice of lecture. XD
I can think up ideas for the expirement… Identifying minerals by the color of their rubbings, whether they glow in the dark, how they break, how hard they are, and if they fiz when a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Oh. Duh.
I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!
*stares at you with total deadpan face*
Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?
Thanks so much!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
18-19
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Awesome! What do I do with my outline now that it’s written? Do you want it submitted somewhere?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Lol. Yeah…
XD If we get someone to twit him about the right thing, something would blow…
He’s usually a bit shy: a bit excited to meet people, but more than a bit uncomfortable with all the nuances he picks up on in situations. (Or thinks he does. Sepf-focused/self-conscious issues there) He’s used to getting picked on and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 11 months ago
Just opened this thread to read this:
“Well… I respect it because it’s a god, but I don’t have to like it. And it tries not to like me either because that would go against its morals. It doesn’t just talk, it preaches.”
😂 I have no words. Just goofy, suppressed laughter noises. XD Qhivzim sounds like my sister’s cat if they only l…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I am still sorely tempted to have my quiet guy haul off on someone. This is bad. His character development is at stake.
Viktor
“Any good? At science?” Viktor lifted one shoulder in a half shrug. “Ja, I guess so. I can remember things, I just…”
The pencil he had pulled back out waved aimlessly about as he searched for…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@whalekeeper Ehhhhh. Needlessss… *shudder* 😉 I hope it well well!
Wow. I just wrote an RP and it got completely out of hand. I haven’t had Viktor yelling at anyone in a while, but I just found a trigger. XD It’s a bit excessive for the moment though, so I’ll edit to what I was originally intending before I send it in.
His poor…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
…. and then he got pushed off a building.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
PART 2
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
The question is…. is that good or bad? 🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
perfect!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
No problem.
I’m guessing that means you just read the chapters? Or did you not get to it yet?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
And that is a question I had to scroll pretty far back to answer.
Do we wait for Hugo, @whakekeeper ?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I know! Poor guy!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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