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@catwing Haha, yeah it kinda does. 😀

NO PEOPLE I AM NOT OUTLINING SEEKJUSTICE’S BOOK FOR HER! She did a fine job already. 😉

@valtmy Hi. 🙂 Wow, you finished it already? I’m just hoping I can make the deadline!

@catwing @seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @ariel-ashira @kaya-young @skredder @dekreel @dragon-snapper @clairec @valtmy

Hi! I’m outlining and reading Seekjustice’s book. Anyone wanna join me?

@clairec Wow, this drought seems pretty serious for you guys. I’ll try to remember to keep on praying.

@dekreel Aw, I love that! 😀

@catwing Ooh, nice! 😉

I suppose I need to tag someone now…

@seekjustice  Make a one-sentence story out of this picture:

Ohh, thanks for bringing this topic back! I loved it!

Lessee. I’ll do one for that girl with her arms spread out…

“And though she didn’t know it, though He was invisible, He was holding her by the hands like a baby learning to walk.”

How’s that? 😛

Would anyone like to get this going again? I know we have way fewer people here now, but I think it might work. 🙂

If any of you are interested in starting this again, I’ll go ahead and post this for anyone who wants to write a one-sentence story for it…

@dekreel @dragon-snapper @seekjustice @rochellaine @clairec @ariel-ashira @alia @catwing…[Read more]

@catwing Yay for your Kapeeferversary!!! 😀 Congrats!

now that I think about it, I’m actually not quite sure how long I’ve been here…I know I started a ‘belated hello’ topic in January of 2018.

@catwing I can’t come on right now, but I was planning on doing your poll thing soon. 🙂

@valtmy

I’ll hunt down some books on that then, and set to work reading them while my beta readers finish off the document and I’ve already started doing some serious worldbuilding. I see that as my main things to tackle in the next draft 😀 Thanks for all your input!

@valtmy

I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).

I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@seekjustice @valtmy

Sorry but I will have to leave now. Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@valtmy Yup! *bows*

@seekjustice That’s good; one of the things I struggle with most is creating an interesting plot that actually makes sense.

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@seekjustice Hello to you as well. 😉 How the third infinity book coming?