Louise Fowler

@valtmy

I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).

I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@jenwriter17 @valtmy

I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

@dekreel 🙂

@valtmy Got it. Thanks so much!

@seekjustice  I guess I’ll try the Google Doc then. 🙂

@dekreel

I don’t mind which you use 🙂 Feel free to go with whatever works best for you.

@seekjustice  Great, thanks.

By the way, sorry I haven’t been reading your book lately. I’ve just been unsure about which document I need to read from. (The one in the email or the Google doc.) Hopefully I’ll start up again soon…

Which do you think I should use, the Google doc or the email doc?

@dekreel

Currently it is just about 1pm. 🙂

@seekjustice  I’m doing fine.

May I ask what time is it in your region of Australia right now? Just so I know when you’re awake and asleep. If you don’t want to answer though, that’s fine.

@dekreel Hey! I’m doing all right. What about you?

You know you’re a writer when you pace back and forth in your room repeating your character’s name in different accents, trying to find a good accent for your world.

@seekjustice  @catwing  @valtmy  @rochellaine  @alia  @jenwriter17

Heyy, I will be world-building if not writing a bit. How are y’all doing?

@valtmy

Awesome, I look forward to hearing your thoughts. 🙂

@catwing  HAHA, I love it!! Well done! 😀 😀 😀

@catwing Bravo! That sounds like a good plan 🙂

Ooh, frozen yogurt sounds nice. I don’t think its really a thing here.

@valtmy Wow, finishing up? You did that pretty quick!

@catwing are you still around?

@rochellaine I love real life spy stories (not fictional ones though. I can’t stand those). What sort of things did you learn about at the museum? (I mean, other than spies?)