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@elishavet-pidyon

I just read it! It feels so nice, I feel like I could be there in the atmosphere. I think it would be nice to have some more descriptions of the characters. It’s easier for me to remember the names if I have some more attributes. You have a lot of general vibe characteristics (mannerisms) which is really good, that’s the kind of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh yay! Kaine has been being super socially awkward this whole time (More like I’ve been having a hard time finding a rythm lol) and would love a buddy XD

@freedomwriter76

YEP THAT’S MY BOIIII <33

@freedomwriter76

Aww I love it!! Also I love that Rueben said so little compared to the rest, but it’s so true.

@freedomwriter76

Oh also I’m going to re watch civil war with my sister this weekend 😁 apparently I haven’t marveled her out XD

@freedomwriter76

Lol, maybe every boi you write is broken 😂

@freedomwriter76

The ‘I already died’ quote 😭

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Lol yeah! We forgot about the poor bois!

Let’s come up with some kind of a event to occur to move things along maybe? Idk… a battle? They fall through the floor into a escape room? I dunno 😂

@jonas

Lol, this is complicated. We’ll just pretend he didn’t notice Kaine.

@jonas @grcr

LOl ok there’s some kind of misunderstanding. Kaine is eating at the banquet when he talks to Ellis and Flaz, and it sounds like we haven’t reached that part yet. So yall can just wait till they are talking at the banquet to reply.

@everyone

Thanks!!

@Jonas

Sure! Whatever works.

At the time I wrote it people had just entered the dining hall. I’m still slightly lost… but I’ll get caught up another day.

Are they already done with the banquet then?

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @grcr @rae

Ok I have no idea who’s where and I’m a little late, the last part of my rp is at the feast though. If you own one of the characters I interacted with and they aren’t at the feast yet, you can disregard it until they get there 🙂

@freedomwriter76 (Tagging you…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww I love it 😭😭😍

I’ll be able to rp tommorow afternoon! I’m making a comic instead because I was in a drawing mood XD

I had to go back so many pages to find Flaz’s description lol, this rp is moving so fast

Okay, completely unconnected, and I’ll disappear after this because I have never read KotLC, but…

If elves are vegetarian, why do they hunt deer in the Hobbit?

I mean, I am the person who has never seen the movies and despite not living under a rock still clings to a black haired, green eyed Legolas. I have also only read two stories from the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sounds like a plan! Pls tag me if you have any cute scenes of Ruebsy or Wolfie 🥰

@jonas

Oh.. are the dragons evil? Kaine won’t want to fight them unless he has confirmation XD

@rae

It’s fine! Do expect some cockyness from kaine though 😝

It might be a bit till I can get back to yall, looks like I have some catching up to do here… and on schoolwork ;(

@mineralizedwritings

It’s definitely been a while! A lot of things have conspired to keep me off KP. (Mainly College and Bible Quizzing) I’m still here though. How have you been?

Thank you, I await thy assessment in eagerness.

@elishavet-pidyon

woah, it feels like I haven’t seen you in ages! Your writing style is lovely, sadly it’s getting late and i’m to tired to leave a critique lol, keep up the good work!